MC STUPID! FANFIC USELESS!

my god, this genderbending is so disorienting lmao

You need to find an editor that doesn't speak English as a second language.

I would highly suggest rewriting this, it has potential but it's wasted due to terrible writing skills. At least get a beta.

My expectation? Archer Gilgamesh clawing their way out of Malt in disgust at a God trying to manipulate and use his power.

When I read "genderbend story" in the synopsis, I had assumed, and hoped, that what you meant was that Zelretch decided to troll Shirou by turning him into a girl...

Honestly I see two problems here.

1) the genderbending everyone was pointless. Unless Shirou is gonna to romance the genderbent king,Naofumi, and the other heroes there was literally no reason to do this.

2) Shirou is pointless and causing more problems than solving. The thing with sending heroes from crossover/SI to help the good guys is only when they're going to lose or get a bad ending. This never happened in canon and Shirou and his class cards are causing more problems than solving. Meaning Shirou is a liability not a helper.

This was pretty good

This was great so far

No offence but this chapter was sort of meh it was building up to what felt like a bit of story the truth of the situation revealed maybe sword hero defects people get gathered e.t.c. But you just sort of jumped straight to oh no everyone is corrupted by the power of Angra Mainyu and now only Shirou is left that can really do anything all others are now villains and specifically targeting Hercules or rather Alcides due to the mud doesn't feel right dunno why though just doesn't feel like the right choice.

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We’re in the endgame now, I think, either way it’s getting exciting. I wonder what the card Naofumi has is? I can’t tell. Can’t wait for the next update.

Absorbing Angra Mainyu?
Nothing in Shield Hero can actually withstand Angra Mainyu's All the Worlds evils.

You have to be a Shirou to even withstand a dosage of it.

An evil person will get swarmed in the curses and die, a good person will be irrevocably changed.

A neutral will be mostly unaffected.
It's why Gilgamesh could survive it aside from his ego. He wasn't a good or evil, he was a True Neutral.
Same reason why it took a while to subsume Shirou in all routes and even Archer.

Seriously though, this story is just turning into a Holy Card war, which is incredibly boring. I'll be dropping this then.

Like seriously, the cards were entirely unnecessary and just detracted from the actual crossover.

well this is starting to get more crazy

Nice chapter