Pardon me if I'm being presumptuous or you're not taking any suggestions, but I think Rousseau really deserves some femme-slash 3 I think your writing could do her justice too!

Wow - I am watching this episode as I read this and it is powerful! I thought "Mother" was pretty harsh, but your back story totally makes me believe that she was a victim and had to overcome to get where she is now - even though she is a murderer.

Great story!

Love this friendship

You have to continue this ! I'd like to see them piss off Ben and maybe become defectors...just hoping

Sigh...so good and Kate's dad is included!

I could perfectly envision this scene from the show...thank you

Seriously, this one has the potential to be at least 3 - 5 chapters long - I loved Jill the butcher lady - great stuff!

Lovely! You are a prose artiste!

Oh! Something new from you! I'm buckling in and ready for some new adventures!