Please update soon

Lynn Sr. is gonna be so pissed and broken hearted.

Hmm. Dialogue is a little off at times, but that's not really much of an issue.
Moving on, I see we're somewhat early if both Ziva and very special agent Anthony are still around... i approve!

(When i saw the Gibbs part i HAD to read this. I mean, talk about a niche crossover!)

Not sure what is more unsatisfying. The fact this is yet another NSL fanfic or the fact every chapter been so incredibly short and at the same time takes a while to update just for something that can be read in 30 seconds.

Wow. I knew it.

Well now Lincoln will have a real family. _

Please place this story in the crossover category

Please update soon

We get it! NSL is a bad episode and the Louds were horrible to Lincoln in it. I think we got that after the billionth fanfic about this.

It was pretty great. Thanks!

It's nice to see this get updated.

I guess it would make since for the FBI to get involved given Lisa experiments and it was somewhat funny to see DiNozzo ask if they could put a muzzle on the baby after she bit him.

Anyway it looks like the whole town saw the Loud family getting arrest due to the news report. It was kind of a shame that it sounds like the community fundraising event is going to do so well.

I look forward to the next chapter.

Please put this story in the crossover category.

Glad to see it updated. Can't wait to see where you go from here.

I still think you should place this fic in the crossover category

Why make send the family to a facility in Washington DC when the crime was committed in Royal Woods.

Great chapter