| Reviews for Soul Flame |
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The Book of Eli chapter 12 . 6/30 Short chapter yes but it had fun... |
likes to read alot chapter 10 . 6/19 Ok never mind if I had continued reading I would have found out anyways. I love the story can't wait for more. |
likes to read alot chapter 6 . 6/19 Is the secret girl tatsumaki from o.p.m? she is the only one I can think of that fits your description |
Xerzo LotCN chapter 12 . 6/10 so his short stack harem is going well but few things is toga going to be a waifu and what about ochako she hasn't come up at all i think what about pony also are any of the shorter pro heroines on consideration? also is there 15 waifus cause there was 16 suns or flames counting his own but his orange ring has 6 and it was mentioned a brown ring but that hasn't come up again |
BoredKing chapter 12 . 4/8 Wait what about Kinoko? She wasn't registered as part of the team and tested in normally, shouldn't she have to take the assessment? If your struggling so much to write this then just take a break, work on another story or something. It supposedly helps with writer's block. |
BoredKing chapter 11 . 4/8 Ok, you need to work on your punctuation, commas and quotations more specifically. And you have a few places where you wrote the same thing twice like, "he already knew already knew" |
BoredKing chapter 9 . 4/8 You're supposed to write opening a closing quotation marks whenever someone starts and stops speaking. Like you wrote , "Wow, Minori exclaimed, how does U.A have the money or time to build this?" but you should've wrote, "Wow," Minori exclaimed, "how does U.A have the money or time to build this?" And one more plushy girl joins the harem. Izuku is gonna have to start carrying them if he gets anymore girls. |
BoredKing chapter 8 . 4/8 Write, not wright. Do you mean manila folder? Cause I have no clue what a mania folder is. Well that was hot, thanks for the smut. |
Guest chapter 12 . 3/20 I like the whole idea other than the fact you killed Bakugou off. I wanted him to at least stick around to get his ass kicked by Midoriya. Other than that tho it is a great fan fiction |
Middernacht chapter 6 . 3/20 wish izuku saved him with sun flames |
The Book of Eli chapter 11 . 3/14 Well the harem grows and i can say things are going to get lewder... |
The Book of Eli chapter 10 . 3/14 Well that's one way to gain a harem fast... |
The Book of Eli chapter 8 . 3/12 Once more the lewd fun matches just how wild fem mineta will be... |
silverjack20 chapter 10 . 3/14 I love this story so much |
silverjack20 chapter 11 . 3/13 I hope you are still doing this cause i love the idea of izuku just going around u.a with three girls on his shoulders and then three more around him or just have them all ride on his shoulders |