cant wait for next chapterrrr, I wonder how they gonna surviveee

Lav ender spying on Hermione is an interesting complication.

There is something wrong with the chapter it’s coding

Please, please, pleaaase update soon (of course if you're busy you can take all the time you need, I'm simply expressing my enthusiasm for your story)

You pinged on one of my pet peeves: the use of third person plural as third person singular, gender not specified. "...who is he?" would be asked, since "Nicholas" is obviously male. Not to mention that usage would not have been taught in the 1980's. (Vernon would have called it unnatural.)

Very sensible, Draco.

Interesting. I suggest to get the chapters longer though. Add your own spin to the story, elaborate on it, shit like that.

Writing isn't easy, but it's better to put these details in story, than to rely on author's notes.

Well Quirinus, hosting The Dark Lord turned out to be more hazardous than you thought.

kkkk

This is so funny I hope you come back to it!

Hmm, a bit of Draco's Black ancestry showing? :)

Since "shell-shocked" has a specific technical meaning, simply "shocked" would be better.

Nice start.

Love it! Go Draco.