| Reviews for The Burglar of Tokyo - Part One: The Start |
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orionastro chapter 2 . 2/10 very good new chapter ,lets see how Harry will use is magical powers to get by , can hardly wait for the next chapters . |
Juti chapter 2 . 2/7 Karma harry what goes around comes around |
James Birdsong chapter 2 . 2/7 Good two chapters |
Kourtney Uzu Yato chapter 2 . 2/7 My, my, it seems the Dursleys will get their dues soon enough, I can only hope they get their asses put on a plate for all the shit they have done, considering that they are just a terrible group of people, but this is an interesting chapter. I can't wait to see how you will make this chapter. |
MikeL59 chapter 2 . 2/7 I am assuming that this story is based on canon except that the Dursleys and Harry moved to Japan. I'm not familiar with immigration rules, but wouldn't there be questions asked if four people entered Japan but only three left? If Harry wanted to, couldn't he tell the school authorities that the Dursleys abandoned him? Assuming that Dumbledore didn't place a spell on Harry that would cause nonmagicals to ignore him, he could cause the Dursleys a lot of trouble. Not to mention what Dumbledore will do when he finds out. Hopefully the Dursleys pay dearly for their stupidity. |
arcenio1995 chapter 1 . 2/3 seria bueno hacer algunas aclaraciones que seria interesante como: -en que esta trabajando vernon (¿es un traslado de la empresa de Inglaterra?) -en japon se lleva un estricto control sobre el desarrollo de los niños (¿como funcionaeso con los dursley?) -como funciona las comunidades magicas en japon? pero eso es mi gusto personal por ahora parece bastante interesante |
Quatermass chapter 1 . 2/1 Just a thing worth pointing out: Japanese attitudes towards bullying are apparently considerably more laissez-faire than in the West, as it's considered something to endure, not to stop. This is why, for example, Katsuki Bakugou is pretty much allowed to bully Izuku Midoriya in "My Hero Academia"... |
NaiaLune chapter 1 . 1/31 Hmmm... I like where this fic is going! I especially like how Harry shows some spine and makes plans to leave way before anybody in the magical world offers him an escape. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter |
Kourtney Uzu Yato chapter 1 . 1/31 Oh shut up, Petunia you miserable harpy. Just because your miserable whale of a husband can't give you a dime for your buck doesn't mean you have to take it out on poor Harry. Maybe if you got a quality vibrator you wouldn't have such a pinched look on your face. Oh Harry, I wish you nothing but the best, but I hope the Dursleys explode or get crushed by a damn random falling piano, but that's just me. Take care, dear author. ~Kourtney Uzu Yato |