Reviews for Bad Kind of Butterflies |
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nbrian72 chapter 19 . 8/28 I'm really loving this story I can't wait for a update |
MK543 chapter 19 . 8/23 Looking forward to Part 2 |
MK543 chapter 14 . 8/23 Sorry, but I'm with everyone who think his 'marriage' is stupid. His kids friends must have tons of step-parents. Edward's example is worse. Anything goes? |
MK543 chapter 12 . 8/23 Good to read but you do use 'she mumbled' & 'she whispered' way too often. Who does that? After sleeping with Edward why not ask him his intentions about Irina. I am sure his kids are appalled Irina lives with Demitri & their dad is okay with it!? I can see why Bella is taken aback with Irina's arrival & Edward seems just fine with it. Seriously? I see this is complete so, I'm just expressing. |
MK543 chapter 10 . 8/23 Cudos! |
MK543 chapter 9 . 8/23 Woo, written so well. |
PINKSAPPHYR chapter 19 . 8/22 That was really good! I can't wait to start the sequel because I want them to get their HEA... Lucy's reaction is understandable, albeit a bit unfair seeing how her mom lives but eh... She's a teenager so I guess it makes sense. My biggest hope now is that Bella finally starts believing in herself and her self-worth. It is quite heartbreaking to see her with such low self-esteem. Thanks for sharing, and see you in the next one! |
tiramisubites chapter 19 . 8/17 This story is so amazing, I read it in a day- I even hid myself away in my room to peacefully read this. It's very well written and the chapters are extremely satisfying. I loved how your characters stayed consistent throughout the story and how little details were always brought back to attention. Honestly, I'm in awe at your writing. I can't wait to read more in the sequel. Thank you for sharing this with us. |
Isao84 chapter 19 . 8/14 Love this story. Can’t wait for the sequel! Thank you for your beautiful story |
VryUnique chapter 3 . 8/11 I hope they’re all petite brunettes...lol I like Edward’s attitude better in this chapter. |
VryUnique chapter 2 . 8/11 Wow... so much to mull over in this chapter. I am definitely pulled in already. I can’t believe the life Bella has had, how awful. I bet her parents come out of woodwork when her face is plastered all over magazines, like she owes them something. I hope they don’t get paid off to keep their mouths shut like in some stories. I hope Edward and Bella do an interview and let the world know what lousy people they are. I don’t mean to act like I know where the story is going but publicity will be inevitable if they end up together. Jacob... ugh... I hope Bella doesn’t start seeing him, I really hate that triangle. Poor Edward... Irina is obviously a bitch, I hope Edward has a prenup. |
VryUnique chapter 1 . 8/11 Married? Ugh... she must of started cheating 2 years ago, or something like that. This story is a romance so his marriage must be over. I hope Bella doesn’t do anything until he’s divorced. |
Sassyvampmama chapter 19 . 7/28 Thank you for sharing this one with us. |
Florchi C chapter 19 . 7/11 I loved the story, I really liked Edward and Bella and I can't wait to read the sequel. Thank you! |
Elvire23 chapter 2 . 7/9 Poor Bella. |