Reviews for Bad Kind of Butterflies
nbrian72 chapter 19 . 8/28
I'm really loving this story I can't wait for a update
MK543 chapter 19 . 8/23
Looking forward to Part 2
MK543 chapter 14 . 8/23
Sorry, but I'm with everyone who think his 'marriage' is stupid. His kids friends must have tons of step-parents. Edward's example is worse. Anything goes?
MK543 chapter 12 . 8/23
Good to read but you do use 'she mumbled' & 'she whispered' way too often. Who does that? After sleeping with Edward why not ask him his intentions about Irina. I am sure his kids are appalled Irina lives with Demitri & their dad is okay with it!? I can see why Bella is taken aback with Irina's arrival & Edward seems just fine with it. Seriously? I see this is complete so, I'm just expressing.
MK543 chapter 10 . 8/23
Cudos!
MK543 chapter 9 . 8/23
Woo, written so well.
PINKSAPPHYR chapter 19 . 8/22
That was really good! I can't wait to start the sequel because I want them to get their HEA...
Lucy's reaction is understandable, albeit a bit unfair seeing how her mom lives but eh... She's a teenager so I guess it makes sense.
My biggest hope now is that Bella finally starts believing in herself and her self-worth. It is quite heartbreaking to see her with such low self-esteem.
Thanks for sharing, and see you in the next one!
tiramisubites chapter 19 . 8/17
This story is so amazing, I read it in a day- I even hid myself away in my room to peacefully read this.
It's very well written and the chapters are extremely satisfying. I loved how your characters stayed consistent throughout the story and how little details were always brought back to attention.
Honestly, I'm in awe at your writing. I can't wait to read more in the sequel. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Isao84 chapter 19 . 8/14
Love this story. Can’t wait for the sequel! Thank you for your beautiful story
VryUnique chapter 3 . 8/11
I hope they’re all petite brunettes...lol
I like Edward’s attitude better in this chapter.
VryUnique chapter 2 . 8/11
Wow... so much to mull over in this chapter. I am definitely pulled in already.
I can’t believe the life Bella has had, how awful. I bet her parents come out of woodwork when her face is plastered all over magazines, like she owes them something. I hope they don’t get paid off to keep their mouths shut like in some stories. I hope Edward and Bella do an interview and let the world know what lousy people they are. I don’t mean to act like I know where the story is going but publicity will be inevitable if they end up together.
Jacob... ugh... I hope Bella doesn’t start seeing him, I really hate that triangle.
Poor Edward... Irina is obviously a bitch, I hope Edward has a prenup.
VryUnique chapter 1 . 8/11
Married? Ugh... she must of started cheating 2 years ago, or something like that. This story is a romance so his marriage must be over. I hope Bella doesn’t do anything until he’s divorced.
Sassyvampmama chapter 19 . 7/28
Thank you for sharing this one with us.
Florchi C chapter 19 . 7/11
I loved the story, I really liked Edward and Bella and I can't wait to read the sequel. Thank you!
Elvire23 chapter 2 . 7/9
Poor Bella.
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