winking and smirking at her husband naruto say my breasts that is the second largest of the ten women with natural large breasts

chuckling to herself hinata smirking at her husband naruto sakura is a idiot for not seeing what i saw growing up that my naruto is a stallion in bed

Not bad. But you need to space out your paragraphs. When a new person speaks, start a new paragraph. Do that and you will have a nice first attempt on your hands.