Oh, this will be fun. Can't wait to see what happens next.

A good chapter. Also, don't worry about the delay. Sometimes you get caught up with stuff and get delayed a bit. It happens. So don't worry about it.

So Bow Kid is here now, I have a feeling she’s going to represent a security risk for Snatcher because one the time pieces and two Hat Kid. That short interaction between him and latter only further proves my point that he cares. Now Snatcher has todo is keep them away from her. I’m gonna guess these time pieces are somehow connected to her especially the their designed (if you don’t know what I’m talking about the time pieces have miniature versions of her hat on the sides I’m pretty sure you know but I’m just making sure and for anyone else who sees this).

Looks my prediction was correct. This is really good so far. Keep it going.

Great chapter. A lot of drama. It seems like Snatcher does genuinely care for her, he may try to hide but he does care for her more than some worker. I like the way you depicted Moon Jumper. Why do I have the feeling something really bad is going to happen.

This was certainly a interesting chapter but was good. I don’t really have much to other than that for now.

Great chapter this is some good explanations. I’m excited for the next chapter

Great chapter can’t wait for the next one. I like that this version of snatcher is at least nicer than the snatcher we all know.

I can already tell this will be an amazing story.

This story is already seeming to have a good start