Very nice chapter! And a very enjoyable story. I really like your series! Just wondering, where is Leon?

Awesome!

Prepare for a long review. I’ve got questions and not purely from 4.0. First, I really love the Game On series. I’ve read and re-read them so many times. Probably my favorite stories I’ve read here on . Moving on, I’ll start with my thoughts on 4.0. I like the plot line so far. I really like Sakura’s character (way better than cannon Sakura). I love her relationship with the Inuzuka. I liked the way Chaos Game was set up better in its previous iterations. Quests and Perks are quite different in 4.0. There’s barely any mention of Perks other than Naruto’s Adamantine Chains and Sakura’s change into an Inuzuka. I know Yagami has no need of them with all her bloodlines. There’s no mention of Challenges, Arenas, or Dungeons even though that seems like it would be good training. The Secondary quest from just after the Ushizogakure visit seems really random. I mean, Ling’s quest from 2.0 was a Secondary quest and that was a semi-important part of the plot. This was just a save the family from bandits and never hear from them again. Some characters – Ren, Naruto, Sasuke – got really strong really fast. Yagami seems rather over powered with all her bloodlines. Not much mention of her training with them, but being able to use them quite easily. Oh and speaking of the 10 bloodlines – what are they? Uzumaki, Inuzuka, Nara, Hatake, Senju, Uchiha, Kurama, what are the other 3? And already Kage-level at age 9? The level breakdown seems not quite right. Quick question – so is her body trying to go back to what it was as Tsukiko because she ascended as Tsukiko during that life? Also, at the beginning Ren mentioned wishing his Shape-shifting ability was better so he could have the senses of a daiyoukai, but shape-shifting shouldn’t allow him to have the abilities of a daiyoukai, just the looks.

One big thing that kinda bothers me is the number of people who know she is a goddess/reincarnation. Why did the council need to know she was a reincarnation? The Inuzuka were holding the House of Moon territories and she is a “descendent” of that clan so it belongs to her. So why tell them she was a reincarnation? I can see teams 7 & 8, Kakashi, Hizuren, Tsunade, Jiraya, Kagami, and the other villages kages and the Anbu since they were there during the invasion But no real reason for others. Well, I guess Shikamaru too since the whole Nara clan seems to know about Ren being a god. And then she goes and tells Naoki, Tsukimaru, and Fuki. And making her a clan leader to the experiment children seemed odd. They’re barely mentioned other than it happened and now they’re settled in their clans. Ayami and Isao maybe, but why the others? Also, for being so important to Yagami, Isao and Ayami aren’t mentioned much, especially Isao. I would’ve expected them to feature more and for Yagami to have shared Chaos Game with them much earlier. Another similar problem: there are an awful lot of Chaos Game players. Okay, I can see Sasuke, Sakura, Kiba, Ayami, Isao, Tsume, Kagami, Anko, Sarenhas, Hinata and Shikamaru (I’m assuming they’re players but I can’t find the exact place they were added), and maybe Tsunade and Jiraya (maybe). I can kinda see the bijuu, though I’m not sure why they’d need it. But Neji, Lee, Gai, Iruka, Yakumo, Naoki, Tsukimaru, and Fuki? I’m not convinced about them.

Okay, next. When Yagami messed with Sasuke and Anko’s seal, were they made into her Holy Servants? And to Shadow or Midori no Tsuki Kamisama? (Oh and I was curious what Yagami does with the prayers in the inbox of her Holy System tab.) If they’re holy servants, what kind? And what’s the difference in her different servants? Wrath is her disciple, the Vindice and Miroku were her priests, Genkai became a shade-reaper (what is a shade-reaper’s duty and why that instead of being her priestess/miko?). Kanna and Hakudoshi were mentioned as Holy Servants, but not specifically what they were.
And if Makai became the Summoning Realm, what happened to Underhill?

At the end of 3.2, under the Holy Affinity Skills her Shadow Art was listed at 0/100. But she used shadows and her Darkness Walker Ability quite often in 3.1. Ryoichi and Tsukiko created Second Life as a new world so are they deities to that world like they are to Earth and Gaia? And is Hamura taking his descendents to the moon in 3.5 a lead in to Sailor Moon?
Okay, that’s all I can think of right now. Thanks if you actually read all this.

Nice!

Why did you stop with this fanfic

super, can't wati for next chapter! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

It's nice to see this story progressing. Half of the taled beasts can take form, and villages are starting to cooperate. Looking forward to more!

more author, more pls... (个_个)

The new chapters are great. At first they felt rushed but after reading the whole story I realized they weren’t. I’m looking forward to Yagami meeting B, seems like it will be interesting. A recommendation for a series would be the how to train your dragon movies and tv shows. It would be interesting seeing how the dragons reacted to someone marked as a dragon treasure. Otherwise keep up the good work.

Está buena la historia , siguiente porfa :3

I can't wait for Tsukiko guardiants to come back on Earth! I want to see Kakashi and Sesshoumaru meet. But Sarenhes and Kaguya's guardiants are all dead?It's better for Orochimaru to never meet Tsukiko's guardiants after all he did to Yagami and the kids.

I really appreciate your series. I never thinking that the Uzumaki and some other clans could be yokai descendants. I can wait for the next chapter.

and she finally changed back to a full demon! woohoo!

oh my god! I can't wait to see flames in the chunnin exams, or the descendants the be met, for the reunion of Shadow's sky set! oh my gosh I'm so excited!

sorry, sorry... I really enjoy this series and reread it repetitively. it's helped me out in so many different ways and situations I can't thank you enough for all of it. I shall patiently impatiently await your next update as I try to calm my excitement to rest for a couple hours.

I hope you are doing well, and have a good rest of your week.

mwahahahahaha! they paled... they do realize they are also getting it slightly easy right? Shadow could be training them into the ground using everything she has learned from every life, even skills long forgotten that are useful against their opponents...

oooo I would love to see Sinclair descendants! she how that would go and everything. it would be amazing...