This is good, please continue.

Oooh, things are heating up! This is really good. The grammar is really good too and it's interesting to read it from Sandy's perspective. Keep it up!

Great chapter; I loved it

Great chapter; keep up the great work

First of all, let , me thank you for your opinion about The Cottage, I do appreciate it. I’m doing great, it’s just that my fanfic days are definitely through. I’m writing now my very own stories, in another website ( W attpad ;) ).

About this story, I think it has potential, but you could possibly focus more on characters’ thoughts and feelings, I find this chapter goes way too fast! Take it easy on that, make characters yours ( hope you know what I mean) And please, watch out the punctuation after some sentences, some periods are missing here and there.