So... WTF is going on? Will the background be covered at some point? Why did Lisa and Taylor bail and live on the streets for a while? Why is there bad blood with Grue? What happened with Taylor's dad and with Coil? What is the PRT up to?

Good chapter, but it should be labeled chapter 5, since last chapter was an interlude. Also when did Taylor change to apothecary? I thought she was going by Asclepia?

When Chris is describing the 2 girls, he says one has black hair, and one has blond hair, but wasn't Taylor's hair dyed red, as mentioned in the first chapter?

I'll admit to curiosity as to what exactly happened that got the Undersiders to leave town... And I don't think I saw any mention of Alec in here... Did he survive whatever happened?

I really enjoy the interactions between Taylor and Lisa in this. I can't wait for more (:

That was brutal. I guess there's a reason the saying "you don't mess with a man's family" exists...

Good stuff, though.

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Second.

Interesting take, feels like I dropped into the middle of the story though...