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Love this. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

When will this story be updated?

Great story

i absolutely love it one of the best fem naruto crossovers i have read. cant wait for the next chapter

Can’t wait for the next chapter

o please write more

Really hope this shall be continue

Oh this is good.
Can't wait to find out what happens next.

The crossover is good. I don't find many good Avatar crossovers that I like. The Last Airbender is one of my favorite cartoon as a kid, so I think I will enjoy this story. Hope to read more soon. Keep up the great work! Cheers~

I'm liking this story so far. I like how you made these two shows your own without losing the character dynamics. Well done. The plot is intriguing and makes good use of the characters. I do hope you will continue I for one would like to know what is coming next.

Look, let me start by saying that this is NOT a flame whatsoever, it’s a criticism. Yes, I could be kinder, yes. Just how I could be more rude, but I’m holding this for months, and I mean m-o-n-t-h-s... Since about that other work of yours, that KHR with Naruko and Todoroki that you rewrote. I’m talking about the original one. And I’m getting a little stir crazy in this quarantine so... yeah.

Here it goes: you have a writing tic. It’s in all of your works (at least the ones that I’ve read recently), pretty much all of your chapters (it’s rare one where it doesn’t happen), and it happens more than once in a single chapter, sometimes within one or two paragraphs. Now, you might already know this (or not), because it appears a lot less than it used to; in the origininal KHR work Nirvana there were chapters in which it occurred 10 times or over! Yes, I counted. It averaged 5 per chapter. This one specifically shows 4 times, one on then with a one paragraph between. I know because every time I see one it’s like a punch in my face.

So, I complained (a lot sorry), but what is your writing tic (in case you’re not aware of it)? It’s “chewed/chewing on her/his bottom lip”. I have no idea why, but your characters chew on their bottom lips so much that I wonder how they still have one. How they did not eat it already?!

Tl;dr: you have a tic that annoys the hell out of me. You have improved your writing tremendously in the past months, I’ve read all of your works (just checked your profile) and enjoy them. Even with the “chewed her/his bottom lip” that, to be honest, infuriates me, I still read they and will continue to do so. I like your plots, I like your pairings, and I like you writing (most of it at least). So thank you for taking your precious time (because free time is precious) to write them and I hope it gives you pleasure and enjoyment just as it gives me reading them.

PS: about this chapter... I pity Zuko and am hating Naruko here though she has a point, but that’s because I watched the cartoon and am biased towards him.

PPS: you could say I also have a tic here with my extensive use of parentheses. (No one is perfect).

interesting, I am curious to see how Naru effects this world

I think naruto was right calling aang a coward, and that she believes zuko has good in him

Increíble capitulo continua pronto si
por cierto seria bueno que ella le pidiera a los sapos que le lleven algunos pergaminos con nuevas técnicas y de paso algunas armas ya que ella así podría seguir entrenando sus habilidades de shinobi ademas de algunos pergaminos del clan Uzumaki, Namikase, con las técnicas de su familia para aprender técnicas de sus antepasados y de paso mandar un mensaje a Iruka-sensei donde informa que ella esta bien pero que no puede volver a casa ya que el volver podría matarla generando la liberación del kyubi