Reviews for The Mail Order Bride
InvisibleBallerina chapter 9 . 6/8
That was great! I love this story! But is that the end? No updates since April and no notice that this story has been completed. Please don't leave us hanging!
TessaH chapter 9 . 4/19
OMG! I love this! Lucas is such an awesome husband and father...I wish we could have seen this as an episode that aired on TV! I love the ending of the chapter! :) NEED more soon please!
TessaH chapter 8 . 4/14
Please keep going with this story! I am really excited to see where this goes...I like the image of Lucas having a baby and see his interactions but I admit I'm kind of hoping that the real mother will want her baby back after the couple gets attached...that way they will discuss trying for their own baby! :) Dont leave us hanging too long...PLEASE!
Guest chapter 8 . 4/5
As excited as I am about seeing and reading a new chapter to this story I think I am in a little shock right now...they both just took the baby in without talking it over or thinking about it...it seemed a bit off with the rest of the story. They very slowly worked their way to a kiss so I guess I thought they would help the baby but not just take him in without even discussing it. I am disappointed in Mark's attitude although I'm guessing that's probably what his reaction would be given that circumstance lol. I love that image at the end with Lucas thinking she looks good with a baby. I just hope this baby doesnt interfere with the romance! Please keep it going!
TessaH chapter 7 . 4/3
Yay! So excited to see another chapter waiting for me in my email! I love the nervous energy the couple has going on! Lucas is such a gentleman:) She dropped off that baby and left didn't she?! I was hoping Lucas would see her with the baby and see what a natural she is then they could talk about having one themselves...maybe that could still happen? I am soooo excited to see what happens next! Keep the chapters coming...please!
WillowDryad chapter 6 . 3/30
Oh, goodness, you would stop there! I'm really enjoying this.

I'm not sure Mark would be that smirky. He seems like he's at the age where he'd be more oblivious.

Looking forward to more. :)
TessaH chapter 6 . 3/29
Oh my gosh I was in panic mode thinking you gave up on this story! I love this so much! I cant believe they finally kissed! I love that Lucas says he would never let anyone hurt her...so protective...goosebumps! The kiss was a lot more intense then I was expecting but awesomely fantastic! I love Mark so much but darn him for interrupting them lol. Ok, I am totally hooked so you definitely have to keep going on this story, please! No promises that I wont pester you ;)
Guest chapter 4 . 3/11
I am really enjoying this story. Cute and true to the characters. But in that time period, no one would say asap. Still it is nicely written.

Looking forward to more!
WillowDryad chapter 5 . 3/11
Really enjoying this. I'm glad Lucas was frank with her about what happens when a man is too familiar with the saloon girls. I don't know how much time a rancher's wife would have to be away from the ranch, but I like Mikayla. She seems a good fit for him and Mark. Looking forward to more.
Guest chapter 5 . 3/3
I'm so excited to see another chapter! When are the going to kiss already?! *biting my nails and pulling my hair* They are sooooo perfect for each other! I love how this story is going! What is the mysterious item? What is she going to ask Lucas!? I cant wait for the next chapter!
TessaH chapter 4 . 2/20
So excited to see another chapter to read! You are torturing me though, you realize this, right? I mean...they were soooo close to sharing a kiss and, as much as I like Mark, I wanted to scream at him lol. Ok, deep breath now...eagerly awaiting to see what happens next!
TessaH chapter 3 . 2/15
I am loving these chapters...keep them coming! I am a sucker for happily ever after so I do hope that is your intentions and you dont kill her off or anything because that would break my heart. I hope Mark gets his wish too with a sibling ;) Are they going to have a real kiss soon? This is such a fun read and I love the story line. I cant wait for the next chapter!
TessaH chapter 2 . 2/15
Oh my gosh, this is soooo good! I usually read more father/son dynamic stories but I just couldn't stop reading and this is fantastic...I'm hooked on and have to know what happens next! PLEASE continue on! I love all the details...please keep going with this!
TessaH chapter 1 . 2/14
Love this! Pkease continue with the story!