Reviews for Three Clans
icanwrite13 chapter 12 . 6/6
Well, I'm happy with it if you're happy with it!
Mosscloud chapter 12 . 6/6
Ummm, I'm not sure if you still need OCs, the alligences looked pretty bare but I'm not sure how updated that is... anyway here is some OCs if you want them!
Name: Hareleap
Clan: Wherever their needed
Rank: Warrior
Gender: Male
Appearance Short: a white tom with one gray paw and yellow eyes
Appearance Long: a white tom whose right front paw is gray, his eyes are a bright yellow, like corn
Personality: He's determined to be the best warrior he can be, extremely loyal to the warrior code and his clan, honest to a fault, really oblivious
Other: Can he have a crush on someone? Someone that's he's always trying to hard to impress.

Name: Webshine
Clan: Wherever their needed
Rank: Warrior
Gender: Female
Appearance Short: a silver tabby she-cat with blue eyes
Appearance Long: a shiny silver she-cat with gray tabby stripes, left ear in torn, and there is a scar shaped like a bite mark on he left side that she got fighting a fox as an apprentice, her body is cover is other scars too include a claw mark across her right eye (all from the same fight with a fox when she was six moons old)
Personality: She's normally really quiet and collected, a great strategist, ambitious and wants to be leader someday, she's also kinda standoffish, she accidentally intimates many cats due to her quiet nature and scars
Other: Sometimes she wishes that she had a more friendly appearance, she got attacked by the fox on her when she was hunting by herself, her mentor was lazy and often taught Webshine (then Webpaw) the bare minimum of what she needed to know and then left her to her own devices, Webshine never forgave her mentor for allowing her to go off as a young apprentice, she only survived due to a border patrol finding her and chasing off the fox

Name: Sleekpelt
Clan: Wherever their needed
Rank: Medicine cat, if not warrior
Gender: Male
Appearance Short: a sleek, black tom with green eyes
Appearance Long: a shiny, black tom with mossy green eyes,
Personality: As a young warrior he was always aloof and lazy, now he works harder to serve his clan, and often tries his best, he's forgetful, unobservant, and a little self-centered, but he is also really kind and caring and a good listener
Other: He was Webshine's mentor, she was his first apprentice. He was devestated when she got attacked by a fox. When she was in the medicine cat den he would help collect herbs and learned quite a bit about healing. After Webpaw was made a warrior, he became a medicine cat apprentice in order to serve his clan and help cats that were injured like his own apprentice. (If he's not a medicine cat, he just tried to become a better warrior)

Name: Sprucepaw (Spruceleaf)
Clan: Wherever their needed
Rank: Apprentice
Gender: Male
Appearance Short: a dark brown tabby tom with light green eyes
Appearance Long: he has a scar on his right leg from an infected wound that delayed his warrior ceremony
Personality: He's bitter about his delayed warrior ceremony, but otherwise he's happy and carefree and loves spending time with his friends
Other: He has a crush on Webshine, Mudpaw is his brother

Name: Mudpaw (Mudwhisker)
Clan: Wherever their needed
Rank: Apprentice
Gender: Male
Appearance Short: a white tom with brown patches and light green eyes
Appearance Long: he has a brown patches on the left she of his face, the right side of his body, and his left back paw, his eyes are a little darker than Sprucepaw's
Personality: He's passive aggressive, loves getting what he wants, boastful, arrogant, overconfident, impatient, he's also loyal to his clan and deeply cares about his family, he also likes to flirt with she-cats that don't have mates
Other: Sprucepaw is his brother
Random Fans chapter 12 . 6/5
Wonder how this will end OwO. :0 Nightpaw, you sleek little-

Jk I love it lol.

And I totally understand how you feel- I have this huge idea for a story that has like 2 or 3 sequels, but I haven't been able to finish the first one yet. I LOVE it, but I would NEVER cancel it.

So COMPLETELY understandable.

Stay safe!

RF, OUT!
Crimson.Raspberry chapter 11 . 3/29
Hey, don't know if you'll ever see this or not, but I really loved this story and was woundering if you're ever going to continue it?
yeetledee chapter 1 . 3/26
Name- Pebblespot
Clan- Blossomclan
Rank- Elder
Gender- Male
Appearance short- Pale ginger tom with brown and white spots.
Appearance long- Pale ginger with several brown and white spots and a graying muzzle. One tooth juts from his bottom jaw and he has blazing yellow eyes and very large ears. He is battle scarred.
Personality- He is snappy and very cranky. He often snaps at apprentices if his moss is wet but he has amazing tales to tell.
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Name- Snookpaw (A Snook is a fish that the original clan do know about)
Clan- Rockclan
Rank- Apprentice
Gender- Tom
Appearance short- Silver tabby tom
Appearance long- Silver tabby with black stripes than are long and eyes are pale blue. His claws are a bit longer than usual claws but not too long. He is muscular and large.
Personality- He is snobbish and brags very often. He likes to show off to others. He is a lousy hunter but fantastic at fighting.
Random Fan chapter 11 . 2/16
;-; Okee I cry now. Bye.
icanwrite13 chapter 10 . 2/15
I usually just read because I don't say anything interesting, but I just really want to say something. This is a good read so far! You're doing really good, and I wish I could write like this. Keep it up and don't let anyone tell you otherwise! (remember to take breaks though, you are a human person)
Random Fan chapter 10 . 2/14
Aw, so cute. :3
PhoenixEcho2007 chapter 1 . 2/14
If you are still accepting OCs here mine are:

Name: Cherryblaze
Appearance: orange tabby she-cat with bright green eyes
Rank: warrior
Personality: usually very optimistic, loves making friends, never takes risks, feels like everyone wants to be her, can sometimes be annoying, really wants a mate
Clan: BlossomClan
Family: Alderfrost and Berryfur (littermates)
BG story: Cherryblaze has always stayed optimistic, even through the toughest leaf bare. She wants to be clan leader someday but doesn't have the motivation to work for it.

Alderfrost
Clan: BlossomClan
Appearance: brown tabby tom green eyes and white patches
Rank: medicine cat
Personality: he doesn't get mad easily, not very optimistic, afraid to speak his mind, very good with herbs, doesn't believe in StarClan, has no sense of humor whatsoever
BG story: After Alderfrost's parents died, he never believed in StarClan. He didn't believe that StarClan would let his parents' lives be taken the way they did. He is still a good medicine cat though. He is going to be looking for an apprentice soon, if there's a kit to be his apprentice

Name: Berryfur
Appearance: orange tabby tom gray eyes
Clan: BlossomClan
Apprentice, Willowpaw
Rank: deputy
Personality: Berryfur is pretty much the opposite of Cherryblaze, enjoys scaring his apprentice, enjoys hunting for himself before the clan is fed, might be willing to kill for leadership, disrespects StarClan in secret, no sense of humor, mean, likes fighting, will sometimes fight with his clanmates, hate Cherryblaze
Personality: Berryfur was trained by his clan leader, Eaglestar. He often disrespects StarClan, especially since his parents died. It is set in his mind that nobody wants him or cares about him. So he takes his anger out on his shy apprentice. Berryfur is willing to kill for leadership. (I really want him to be the antagonist if possible)

Willowpaw
Appearance: brown tabby she-cat blue eyes
Rank: young apprentice
Clan: BlossomClan
Littermates: none
Parents: Eaglestar and Thistleheart
Personality: shy, quiet, takes blame for things, really wants to be a warrior, wants to make Berryfur proud of her, has a crush on Alderfrost
BG story: after always being pushed around by her mother, Thistleheart, the shy young Willowpaw was ready to prove that she was warrior worthy. But then she got Berryfur for a mentor and had doubts about her dream
Family: Thistleheart and Eaglestar (parents)

Thistleheart
Appearance: golden tabby she-cat blue eyes
Rank: senior warrior
Clan: BlossomClan
Personality: stuck up, mean, Eaglestar's former mate, hates Willowpaw because she looks like Eaglestar, bossy
BG story: When Eaglestar fell in love with her, she thought it was Fate. But then when she had Willowpaw, Eaglestar knew he wasn't ready to be a father. Thistleheart hated him for that. Thistleheart hates her only kit, Willowpaw because she looks like Eaglestar. Everycat in BlossomClan fears her and Berrynose. She has been plotting with Berryfur to take down Eaglestar. Will they succeed?
Family: Willowpaw (kit)
Orange Peel 5 chapter 9 . 2/8
Name- Chestnutfall
Gender-Female
Rank- Deputy or warrior
Clan- Rockclan
Apperance
Short- black and orange tortoiseshell with white chest and green eyes
Long- Fleet-footed and has a bent tail that throws her off balance but she overcame the problem
Personality- she's social and his active, she really enjoys company and would never leave the camp alone. Chestnutfall is loose over small things.
Other- Her sister is Fernmask

Name-Fernmask
Gender- Female
Rank- Warrior
Clan- Rockclan
Apperance
Short- Orange tabby with a black muzzle and green eyes
Long- tall she-cat, she always smells like ferns, it's her natural scent, because of this she often sneaks into other clans just to sneak in the shadows and poke around, her natural scent being fern hides the smell of cat. she also has a very large scar on her back that goes from the base of her neck to the beginning of her tail.
Personality- Fernmask is a mysterious and distant she-cat, she enjoys eavesdropping and staying quiet about what she's learned.

Hope you can use these :D
The Imprisoned of Hell chapter 9 . 2/8
I was just wondering if you could do a chapter focusing on Vinekit’s blindness and Waspclaw’s efforts to try train her Kit despite his handicap.
Jack the Dragon chapter 9 . 2/8
Here is an OC for BlossomClan, one for FieldClan and one for RockClan:
Name: Bearheart
Appearance: Large black tom
Eye Colour: Amber
Personality: Loyal, gruff, brave and sometimes hotheaded but accept this as it makes him who he is.
Other: None.

FieldClan:
Name: Rowanstorm
Fur Colour: Mottled, bright tortoiseshell-and-white tom
Eye Colour: Amber
Personality: A brave and faithful warrior and is willing and ready for action and adventure. He is also ready to stand up for his friends or any other cat in the clan he knows needs support.
Other: Is also best friends with Gorsethorn for though the two had a rivalry to begin with they have devloped a very firm friendship that has seen the test of time.

Name: Troutfang
Clan: RockClan
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Position: Deputy
Description: Small wiry brown tom
Personality: Snarky, sarcastic, and grumpy but cares deeply about his Clanmates and doesn’t like to be a burden on his Clan.
Random Fan chapter 9 . 2/7
I like the FieldClan apprentices!

Yet another Gathering ended with clouds covering the moon. XP UUUUGH CATS CAN'T STOP FIIIIIGHTIIIING.

Whatever.

Poor Ashkit! D: If there's something I hate, mothers neglecting/favoring/abusing their children is near the top of the list.

It's okay that it's hard to update! Everyone has lives behind the screen, after all XD
yeetledee chapter 8 . 2/5
Name- Darkwhisper

Clan- Rockclan

Rank- Warrior

Gender- Female

Appearance short- Black- and- grey tabby she-cat with pale blue eyes

Appearance long- Black-and-gray mackeral tabby she-cat with pale blue eyes, silver tufts behind ears, and a long scar down her left eye that ends at her cheek

Personality- She is a bit hot-headed and will often try to prove she can do something despite whether that's true or not. But she does have a reason; she gets scared by many things. Not stuff like the fall of a leaf, it's more emotional. She is also a hopeless romantic, always dreaming of her true love, though she has yet found 'the perfect cat.'

Other- N/A
Crimson.Raspberry chapter 8 . 2/4
Hey, so I hope this is okay but I wanted to give Archedpaw and Graypaw a father. I hadn't really gone and given them a family other than each other and wanted to do this.

Name: Shortshadow
Clan: BlossomClan
Gender: Tom
Rank: Warrior
Appearance (Short) Short black tomcat with amber eyes.
Appearance (Long) Short black tomcat with white amber eyes, tufted ears, and a scar that runs from his right eye to his hip, the skin is pink and the fur never grows back.
Personality: Cold and stern. He finds fault in everything and everyone, with the look of disgust making up his features. The only cat he's ever seen actually speaking softly to or being fatherly or caring is to Archedpaw, who he tries to take care of at his best.
Other: Mate was named Sweetshine; a lovely white she-cat with gray spots and blue eyes. She died trying to protect the two kits from the fox, found over the body of Archedkit who was badly injured but survived, and as a last wish told Shortshadow to take care of their only daughter.
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