Interesting hope you update soon

hope to read more.

I really like what you have here and even though I read on your profile you are unlikely to continue this I would ask you to try because its good. at least I think so

This is a really good story! I'd like to see more chapters coming.

Since Harry is still 'he's to the area maybe he could team up with a random guild member every quest for like the 1st month to get the lay of the land? A few in village and then the surrounding area? Like taking out those monesters, how funny would it be if he already did that quest?

I love what you've got going. I hope you continue this!

i love this story good luck

I like the story so far and can't wait to see how it goes.

Great chapter interesting first day in fairy tail can hardly wait to see how he meets thereto crew or what his effect on the guild is.

I am slightly interested in this crossover and pairing but focusing on the story first, I think it was too rushed and there wasn't enough development for Harry blending into the Fairy Tail world. He already has a lot of tricks up his sleeves, adding more will only make his character too OP and it will falter in the future. You need to back track and work out with the story a bit more before rushing into things. Aside from that, it's alright, I like where Harry arrives when Fairy Tail is at their lowest, that will be an interesting point to build his character up with the members of the guild. So, good luck and stay safe

Macao asks Harry his name, even after Harry introduced himself.

There are a few errors where you kept using the rather than another pronoun but otherwise its fine. Hope you continue this.

This was a good chapter I'm glad you made a second chapter. Please update this story again. This is a really good story.

Nah, standard fanfic tropes, I can only assume evil fumbles and standard bashing in the future, and waaaaay too much help to get stronger. Not interested in hp power fantasies.

It's well written, but it not my thing, sorry.

Good start. Of course there are a lot of mistakes with typing and language but I really liked the plot so far. It's a bit too OP for my tastes but hey, as long as the story is sensible, I will stick around.

One thing though, don't start making grand speeches about family bonds, love and what not. That just never goes well and all that sap would kill the story for a lot of people. So, nice efforts and keep it up!

Good to see another addition, hopefully this story doesn't fall to the wayside.