Reviews for Two reasons to come home
NeoJay7 chapter 9 . 10/21
Oh, that grin from Ichika at the end. The twins are gonna enjoy themselves with this fight. Let's hope they don't distract themselves from also helping Laura. Also, that fight with Mattheus and Charlotte. Bad. Ass. Overall, I LOVED this chapter and am looking forward to more.
Just a Crazy-Man chapter 9 . 10/20
Love
LL chapter 8 . 9/27
This is a pretty good and original story. Keep up the good work
DemonHunter52 chapter 8 . 9/9
Dan's grandfather is a smart man it seems. Dude clearly knows the feelings of the teens. I laughed hard on Ren's part. As for the whole conversation with Madoka and Dan, that got me pumping. Both clearly wants to bang each other. As for the Charles scene, it was pretty much same as Stories Told. Always funny seeing how they tossed her around. As for the fight, really liked the whole fight between Madoka Ichika and Maya. Really well put fight tbh. I am really looking forward to next chapter of this fic.
NeoJay7 chapter 8 . 9/7
I see the trap character has shown up. Let's see how this goes with both twins here. And that ending with Laura. Typical of her, but the twins stopping her mid-swing? Impressive. Overall, I loved this chapter and I eagerly await more.
Sev chapter 8 . 9/7
I would prefer to hear your words, but I’ll take your word for if I knew which country you from.
DemonHunter52 chapter 7 . 8/23
Got nothing much to say on this chapter aside from it was fun as hell. Ichika defeating Cecilia and Houki was no surprise tbh. But his fight with Mattheus and Madoka, That was unexpected. I was expecting them to beat his ato the ground since both of them have more experience than him. Guess they underestimated him. Also, really laughed at that song interjection. As for that adult joke, that was funny. With the whole fight, that IS go outnumbered and outgunned. They just annihilated that thing. Lastly the phantom task, I see a few new names and I am willing to wait it out until they reveal themselves. All-in-all, it was a great chapter.
Sev chapter 7 . 8/9
What do you mean guys don’t have it easy in the west what do you by that? And I’m from North America.
TheTrueOverlordBear chapter 7 . 8/6
Ichika with a sword-shotgun style, huh? I guess it fits his more close-range style. And the golem was sent by Phantom Task instead of a certain rabbit-eared lady here, it seems. Other than that, well, I'm looking forward to further developments.
TheTrueOverlordBear chapter 6 . 7/26
It can be annoyingly preachy and grammatically incorrect at times, but all that and that shoehorned AU fanfic reference section aside, there's a lot here which makes me go "Damn, someone finally wrote something as importantly transgressive as one can expect from the premise of Infinite Stratos and the potentially powerful yet shamefully wasted scraps that is its canon." And I'm definitely looking forward to how you'd work up future chapters. :D
DemonHunter52 chapter 6 . 7/5
Is it just me or there will be some yuri between Madoka and Cecilia? Why am I getting a bad feeling about that flashback Cecilia had? As for the power dive, you could have made it funny by Joel clapping and saying "Superhero Landinga little Deadpool reference) as he walked up to him. Both boys sure know how to get out of things or get someone's attention. In a stylish way as well. And yeah, that is kinda creepy and hilarious at the same time. Last thing that I want to ask, wtf was Rin dreaming about? Just reading it gave me goosebumps.
DemonHunter52 chapter 5 . 7/5
A gun barrel always gets the job done that's for sure. I see a few references in there. Joel just keeps surprising me everytime that's all I am going to say for now. As for the chat with Mattheus and Chifuyu, I knew it was coming but wasn't ready for it to be this deep. Especially because of the fact that Mattheus and Chifuyu both were ready to kill one another if it comes to that. As for the fight, again saw some references there and it was hilarious. Great chapter as always
DemonHunter52 chapter 4 . 7/1
Asking because I forgot but how old is Joel? Cause that kid can murder a guy with his words alone. Glad to see a somewhat less dense and sarcastic Ichika. This one feels more like a guy who deserves a Harem unlike his original counterpart from anime/LN. Who called Mattheus tho? Flemish Devil? That aside Cecilia got roasted, as always. I won't go into details but it was hilarious.
DemonHunter52 chapter 3 . 6/29
Dan and Madoka... Why didn't anyone thought of this before. I can never get enough of you referring to TBT or some other fics. Always find it hilarious no matter how many times I have seen it. Cloning concept was used a lot of times in the past but no one put it in such details. Mattheus and Joel are here as well so it will be fun. The whole introduction was just EPIC. I can imagine a floating window above everyone's head saying "B has stopped working." really laughed hard on that. Great chapter as always.
Sev chapter 6 . 6/29
Are you saying you support the matriarchy society where men aren’t treated equally, but I respect your opinion and I expect you do the same. Is it wrong to be naive like I said I realize I do sound, naive but I might take up your suggestion one thing I’ll about myself I was born in the same year as you in June 1995.
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