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Krystalslazz chapter 1 . 6/12 I love this so much. If I could favourite again I would :) |
derekctomlinson chapter 1 . 3/19 hiccup hearing his bedroom door locking behind him turns to find his naked girlfriend astrid smirking at him saying while backing up astrid no i am tired |
jimmix chapter 1 . 2/2 Nice work! Really liked how you wrote the setting. Thought it would be a kisses through there relationship but this was great too. Have a great night! |
JornLK chapter 1 . 1/29 Your descriptions are really great, which makes it easy to imaging the setting, not only the place but also the weather and general feel at the time. Your characterization is great and you understand to make the characters believeable and showing their quirks without singling in on something really paticular. Great short story excited to see more. |
Vivi-ntvg chapter 1 . 1/26 Lovely story! |