Awesome job. I love it. Keep it up.

and here I was... thinking that Molly is safe.
You haven't strayed far from the episode. Your version makes more sense, it being a couple of days to investigate it all.
I love the way you've woven in so much of what we know about her and have just heightened these traits because the couple is way more established.

I loved the little jabs from Hicks to Street at the house :)

And now I return to pray Molly will pull through, after all you killed Nate too. I was hoping he'd survive this one.

hello there,
I am curious to see where you are going after this chapter.
Thank you for including the little Molly tidbits I was missing in the original episode.
I know they ended it with Jim acknowledging the stakes but still...

One part felt weird though: the exchange between the team and Molly. The team knew the truth about him being UC but no one mentioned that...
Enjoy your week and if you find the time I'd love your thoughts on my little one shot Surprise Reunion (well now Chapter 1 of my What if collection) and if you think it is worth continuing and would be willing to beta it for me?

I love this story, please continue soon.
The last paragraph made me laugh.

PS: Have you seen the story Surprise Reunion by lalez... kinda feels like a copy of your concept.

I like your fiction !
Please continue and update when you can...

I love the chapter! I can’t wait to see what happens next!

hey,
I like the take you have.
the addition of the marriage is a complication but also a way for Chris and Tan to find out sooner.
I am looking forward to seeing that conversation.

Keep going and stay safe

I am very intrigued by this chapter! I can’t wait to see where you go with this story!

intriguing start.
curious where you are going

I wonder if Molly will be in this week's show. She hasn't had much screen time since season one. Street is really going to need her around.

Like the premise. Looking forward to reading more.