It's better :)

Love love LOVE your ideas. Crisis would've gone so much better with Lena there. They might've even been able to save the multiverse but noooo, the writers are so scared of Supercorp that they even had to bring in a love interest for Kara in the same season they delve into Lena and Kara's relationship, which they are masterfully fucking up. Sorry, tons of rage and disappointment for this season.

Absolute yes to Lena as Paragon because why the hell isn't she right? I mean seriously.

Thanks so much for sharing your wonderful ideas! Please write more!

Loved it. Felt like it jumped around a bit but it was still amazing. Would love some continuation of their lives together

I really enjoyed reading this! I wish that Lena was one of the paragons... like seriously? Canon chose Lex?

Omfg that was brilliant

Lol I give this story a 10/10 for both content and you’re final comment. Hate to see such a well written story be only a one shot.. brings tears to my eyes. But the ending was still very satisfying

Amazing, as always. Thank you for sharing this with us

Outstanding chapter