Reviews for Hold You Down
Guest chapter 37 . 7/27
Kinda weird how they didn't investigate about the ring more. Boruto didn't even file a missing report smh
aylin122333 chapter 36 . 7/14
/ Lovely!
Guest chapter 36 . 7/14
I'm calling it right now, it's gonna be a plot twist and kiyoko was actually the one who hired the attacker, it makes sense too because how would hoki have gotten on set? And how would he have gotten sarada's new number? How would he have taken that picture from the cast's vacation? So what I'm thinking is that hoki was actually there by complete coincidence and he just so happened to take advantage of the situation to try to get closer to sarada, accidentally making himself seem suspicious in the process.
Guest chapter 35 . 7/13
To the guest that started their so called review with "No offense but this needs to be addressed and brought up before this ends", stfu. Seriously. The story isn't over yet so how do you know what will and won't be addressed? If you think the characters are lacking, hello character development, have you met before? Like wtf? This isn't your story. You're not paying Miss Kairi and Miss Tyy so frankly how YOU want this story to go doesn't matter. Saying no offense doesn't make what you said okay. Why don't you stop and think that there are things you don't know yet that the authors do? Or better yet read the story and realize that what you're saying isn't true. If you don't like the story then fine, don't fucking read it. Having an opinion is fine, but if you're going to leave a REVIEW then have some actual constructive criticism. All I saw was you whining about what you didn't like.
aylin122333 chapter 35 . 7/6
Poor Sarada :c
Boruto is so loving, makes me wanna have such boyfriend ToT
Guest chapter 35 . 7/5
No offense but this needs to be addressed and brought up before this ends. Sarada is coming off as extremely nonsensical and bipolar in this chapter. The simplest notion of Boruto sitting anywhere within a 5 feet radius from Kiyoko (or anyone with a vagina) gets treated as the crime of the century, but it's okay for Sarada to completely ignore the thought of her boyfriend who took her to that restaurant, and then nonchalantly ride to the hospital holding hands with the guy who drunkenly tried to harass her not ONCE, but TWICE in the past. The same individual who has NEVER had even ANY semblance of respect for her relationship OR for her dear lover for the record. Yep totally fair treatment here.

I can't express how humiliating and cringeworthy this is. Don't take my word for it. Look at this from the other side and just ask yourself these things.

Did Boruto cross her mind even ONCE on her way to the hospital?
Where was he?
How nervous and helpless he might be after he sees her missing at the spot?
When will he be with her again?

Or was the sensation of her desperate stalker being wrapped around her little hands, too warm and cozy for her to impulsively forget all about the so-called "love of her life" she's committed to marry, in that very minute? Just wow dude. *slow claps*

For or all the times she has declared her undying love for her Boruto, you would expect that running up to him, or requesting his immediate presence after the whole incident went down, would have been her first course of action. But no, even after she's awake in the hospital, he was still absent from her mind while she was busy defending her newfound hero from her mom and dad. It's like he didn't even exist in her headspace until the minute he showed up himself. Oh I can totally feel their unstoppable love brewing from here. Such a strong connection!

She throws childish tantrums when Boruto so much as even breathes the same air as any other woman in his presence, but does she stop for a second and ever considers how HE must be feeling everytime she's getting all flirty and touchy with other guys? I mean, does she have any consideration about Boruto's feelings and opinions at all, mam?

Or is getting her way around with him is all that she cares about because quite frankly, that's all that happened so far. Boruto simping around, getting her off and then getting jealous every now and then for what? Her selfish little amusement in her fucked up head? I wonder if she even respects him. Because no way this counts as respectful or understanding behavior.

I remember an old comment from months ago about being torn between her options or guys and while I didn't pay much thought to it at the time because I thought the person was bigtime jumping the gun with that one, it's just becoming more and more apparent now that she either doesn't have her priorities sorted out or definitely doesn't deserve to be in a relationship with such a loving person. Especially when she has ZERO regard about the other person's dignity. All she's been is a needy insecure brat without any consideration for her partner.

You mention this is about to end but if just fucking like horny teens is the whole extent of their so called "relationship" thus far, then I hope they don't get together, ever period. She can stop joking around and go make out with hundred guys because it's obvious now that living such a sheltered and fantasizing about novels has created things in her system that she clearly needs to get rid of first. I can't ship them anymore here. Their whole relationship borders on meaningless sex, jealousy and insecurities. I hope Boruto finds someone better. Someone who actually respects him for the person he is (YES A FUCKING LIVING BREATHING HUMAN BEING) and not treat him like a fucking tool to cover for her inferiority and insecurity issues.

"OMG! Look guys! I have a boyfriend now! Awwww i love him a lot ya know or think I do, yes? Dunno, its complicated but he's nice and sweet... And promised to marry me so I did the same... i guess...? Oh btw, I also completely forgot about him when i got assaulted and was happy being with my obsessive ex costar because he's also kind of hot ya feel? Man to be so loved and admired by so many handsome boyz... Eeeeeek my dream has come true heheeeeeeeee"

That about sums up her internal thoughts.
Guest chapter 34 . 6/26
This stalker needs to get their ass kicked.
Guest chapter 33 . 6/20
WOOOOOOOOOOOO Puplic kiss!

I relate with shoyo the most, i have never shipped someone as much as i ship borusara

Also, love shisui's overprotective-ness. Legend has it, if you listened closely enough you could hear him cocking a pistol when he saw sarada's crying face. LOL

great chapter as always, keep up the great work! Now if you'll excuse me i need to go find a certain piece of fanart on twitter.
Guest chapter 33 . 6/20
I don't think its mr. obvious. If its someone who has a grudge on boruto then i can't think of a better person than that ex of his from a few yrs back... The one who got dumped because of sarada lmao. Never took shoyo to be playing the rat here. Classic example why you should never judge a book by its cover lol
Guest chapter 32 . 6/18
This is getting more and more exciting!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/15
OH SNAP! things are getting really interesting! This was a great chapter, and it looks like it's going to be a scary but exciting arc overall.
Born to be wild chapter 31 . 6/15
Jeez i can't wait for their first public kiss. Boruto will absolutely love showing off once he goes public with Sarada. I hope the makeout is so intense that it makes the frontpage of every celebrity newspaper and magazine when it happens. PDA gets a 1000x more thrilling when you've been keeping things under the wraps for so long haha. I hope it's something like where the header reads "LOVE or REBOUND?!" and cue the picture of them kissing with tons of wild theories and speculations written below by hack gossip journalists. Fuck yes! I need this drama to happen.
SG chapter 25 . 6/10
Papasuke is the reason we live for! Absolutely lovely chapter, we all want more Petty Sasuke
Kind of a dummy chapter 31 . 6/9
Another great chapter! I have something to confess: at first i didn't realize what "the ring" meant, and thought it was talking about a phone ring or something. I only realized that it meant boruto's promise ring after I was about halfway through the chapter, yeah, i'm kinda dumb ngl.

Anyway I really enjoyed the chapter, and I think I'm really going to enjoy this new arc. Keep up the great work!
NaluJolteon chapter 31 . 6/9
it's going to be the ninky arc now.
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