Reviews for THE FUTURE IS WRITTEN IN THE STARS
Tanith2011 chapter 9 . 2/14
A beautiful ending to a story that carried with it strong themes of realistic hardships, strength and bravery. It was raw and painful to read the ordeal that Steve, Jeannie and Mike had to go through to reach the rainbow on the other side. It was sad envisioning Steve by Stephanie's graveside and having her exhumed so she could be brought home.
Now they can finally have that happy ending they deserved as family.
Thank you for sharing what must've been a difficult story to write, from the language barrier, the content and the emotions you put into it.
Well done!
SteveFan81 chapter 9 . 2/9
I am definitely late in reviewing! What a lovely ending. It is how I always wanted Steve and Jeannie’s relationship to be. Love that they have a healthy little girl. Thanks for the great story!
Helenem chapter 9 . 2/8
Lovely ending to a very intense story. Thanks for sharing it with us!
Helenem chapter 7 . 2/6
Finally Steve and Jeannie have found their way back to each other. With Steve apparently badly hurt again, will Jeannie stay true to her word and stand by him this time?
Helenem chapter 6 . 2/2
How sad for both of them. Very clever of Mike to figure out how to have Steve and Jeannie's paths cross once again. Hopefully they will find their way back to each other, although it seems as though Steve may be walking into yet another dangerous situation.
Sylvia Elaine chapter 9 . 2/2
There was such a great deal of attention to detail in your story and it was so interesting to read of your vision for the future of Jeannie and Steve. I even shed a tear when I envisioned Steve at Stephanie's graveside. I'm glad they're now wed and happy together. A very enjoyable story. Thank you.
AMANDA ENGLAND chapter 9 . 2/2
What a nice ending ! Well done on a excellent story. Please do not keep us waiting to long for the next one. Thank you.
AMANDA ENGLAND chapter 8 . 2/2
Well I hope Steve managed to catch that where ever he was ! Looks like things are finally going right for the both of them. Hopefully Steve will find where Stephine is and bring her home to be with Helen.
Amanda England chapter 7 . 2/2
Oh no dont tell us Jeannine will desert him again and Steve will have another brain damage ! Hopefully he will of only been knocked out and will come out of it with only a headache.
Amanda England chapter 6 . 2/2
Well I am wondering if Steve will take him up on that. After risking his life with S,F,P,D then changing career I think he may not want to do it.
Another action packed chapter well done,
Amanda England chapter 5 . 2/2
Poor Steve Jeannine needs to change her mind and go back to him. Steve is very good at his job it shows what a good teacher Mike was and how Steve took it all in. At least Steve is still staying in contact with Mike.
Amanda England chapter 2 . 2/2
I think that there is going to be some officers get hurt of worse with the lack of sleep as no one can go without sleep it will make there reactions slower. I hope nobody ends up dying.
Another full action packed chapter from you. Well done.
Amanda England chapter 1 . 2/2
Welcome back its great to see a new story from you.
I hope that Steve is ok as I do not know what Jeannine and Mike will do if he is not.
I love all the detail in this and the way you built up the tension well done.
Tanith2011 chapter 8 . 2/1
Awwww Steve and Jeannie have another chance to be parents. Mike must be over the moon to be a grandfather! I had to chuckle at the thought of him picking up "his kids". He's always looked at Steve as part of his family.
Tanith2011 chapter 7 . 2/1
Glad that Jeannie's marriage to David will be annuled. Lovely reunion between her and Steve. I hope it will work out this time for them. Uh oh Steve is in trouble!
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