Reviews for Shifter
weather witch nami chapter 13 . 7/14
looking forward to more of this hopefuly wonderful story
Osca chapter 13 . 6/29
When is the next update coming, I find this story very original and can not wait for the next chapter!
Ryuuohjin chapter 13 . 6/8
Whatever happened to this?
toile grant chapter 13 . 4/21
very good
Carrier chapter 9 . 4/17
U seem to give the impression that pedophilia is ok if its a woman doing it.
Lyncis Leonis Shaw-Black chapter 13 . 3/20
This story is one of the best I've read! And I've read close to 3,000! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Pokemon chapter 13 . 3/15
This is actually one of your more interesting works... Its a shame you seem to have dropped it...
IWantABetterWebsite chapter 13 . 3/10
I've read a lot of stories where Harry is so wildly different from canon that he might as well be an OC. But this is probably the first time I've seen a story literally replace him with an OC and pretend they didn't. You might as well have actually killed off Harry for how much it will probably matter in this story. You really should have Senna at least act a bit like Harry so that you can at least pretend she isn't purely an OC.

I'm also a bit concerned that Senna is incredibly OP. She's already got the abilities of a phoenix, dragon, basilisk (though she doesn't seem to have realized that yet), goblin (which they really should have gutted her for) and half-giant. And she's probably touched Dumbledore before, which should make taking him down ridiculously easy. The same goes for Voldemort if touching the possessed Quirrell counts.
And if her powers worked on Destiny when they kissed, then she is basically a god now. (Actually, that could be a decent Chekhov's Gun to throw at us if Senna doesn't realize her abilities worked on Destiny until she needs them at the climax of the story.) But even without Destiny's abilities, she is practically a god now, like the goblins said. Realistically, she can do anything she could possibly want to, and it will be very hard for anything to challenge her. And she's already hooked up with Ginny, who knows everything, so there's not likely to be much in the way of emotional/relationship challenges either. So basically, I'm worried that the plot of this story might become flat and boring without any real threats.

Still, I am at least interested enough to keep reading, and I think this story has the potential to be a fun read.
BiGDeal chapter 13 . 3/9
Looks like not the simple beast that you'd expect but something massively overpowering. Bumbledork and the Minister are going be shitting bricks when Remus makes his report. Keep the chapters coming!
Jostanos chapter 13 . 3/5
Hmm.. I wonder what their Patronuses may be?
Compucles chapter 13 . 3/2
Overall, this is a really good story. I like the overall setup you have going here.

However, I wished you hadn't dipped so much into bad fanon. Dumbledore has made some mistakes, and he certainly should be portrayed somewhat unsympathetically in the context of this story, but he's not some prestige junkie who only cares about himself. Then you've also got nonsense like extra Gringotts vaults, alternative ways to Platform 9 3/4, the Weasleys being plants for Harry, and Ron being an idiot bully. Also, exactly how many rules did Hermoine break even during just their first two years at Hogwarts?

I'm also worried that you're making Harry too overpowered. Some of his new abilities and presents seem rather unnecessary. Also, while it's one thing for Harry to have a super rare magical abiity, it's too unbelievable that Ginny somehow randomly happens to have one, as well.
SarahTaylorTam chapter 13 . 3/2
Another good chapter can't wait to see what's to come.
scrappy8 chapter 13 . 2/29
great chapter
EP chapter 13 . 2/29
EXCELLENT
MERCI POUR LA LECTURE
mermizle chapter 13 . 2/29
Leaving off on a cliffhanger like that is the absolute worst. I love your writing anyway though.
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