Your portrayal of the imprint bond is awful. Bella was kidnapped by a possible psycho, and imprint bond or not, she shouldn't be feeling safe or reluctant to run away. An imprint bond isn't enough to feel safe in a situation like that. It also makes no sense that Bella is a stripper by the way. She has no mortgage or rent bill to pay, which means a regular part-time job would be more than enough to cover most bills, along with some of her parents' savings. It's unrealistic that a high school student would be a full-time student taking care of a 4 year old child along with being a stripper almost all night long. You really need to rework your story. Also, fainting makes you pass out for a few minutes at most, not all night long until morning. You also have a million and one spelling mistakes.

I don't find her reaction to being kidnapped realistic at all. Smirking when seeing how far Sam is standing from the glass door, not even asking what they want and why they brought her there... Crying and freaking out, pleading and demanding answers. She doesn't act like a normal person would at all. She doesn't even question why they took her.

Dam didn't see that coming but absolutely loving it! Got me on the edge of my seat so looking forward to reading more hopefully soon

please update soon

Good, plz more soon

This is word for word (characters names changed) the same as "Found by the Alpha" by Madness Reverie on the Dreame site. That book is finished. I suggest you take this down.

MOVE FASTER WITH THE UPLOADS PLEASE! It’s getting so interesting and I’m loving every minute! You have some talent there

Amazing! Please update soon. Fantastic plot but I feel bad for little LuLu

Another great chapter! I was shocked that Emmett and Rosalie are Sam's parents but I'm loving the twist! I did want to let you know that I noticed a few times in the middle of the chapter you used the name Joshua instead of Emmett! Otherwise, it was perfect! Emmett and Rose seem like very kind and welcoming people and I can't wait to see how meeting everyone else goes! Will she have any contact with Sam while she is here? Please update again soon!

Loved this chapter and meeting Sam's parents and excited for them to meet more of the pack.
FYI, I did get a little confused as I think you were calling Emmett Joshua during the discussion about Sam's comma.

Thats so sad! But I get where Bella's coming from. But I also understand Sam's reasoning. Please update soon!
~Ameia Tina P.

Ahhhhhhhhh! Update soon can’t wait to read more!

Omg omg Omg Omg Omg Omg i love it. Another great chapter plis more suunn plis more suunn

Oh my gosh! I loved that she gave a little fight! Can't wait to read what's next! I'm anxious to see how things go with Sam's family! But hopefully the pack deals with James soon and they can come back home! Please update again soon!

Why do you have to do us dirty like that? Making us cry. Ugh she just got him back!