| Reviews for Game Of Life |
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AnonymousChild chapter 2 . 4/22 Updates? |
Death Fury chapter 2 . 2/29 great chapter... I think I like the Copy-Quirk |
Death Fury chapter 1 . 2/29 great job |
Blake Tourdner chapter 2 . 2/6 I like the theory that Katsuki got sent into the past Pass on one for all so my choice is Explosion |
QwertyBobberson chapter 2 . 2/4 Perma-Copy sounds like it would be a more fun first quirk (If you wanna make him OP anyway). I'd love to see Izuku getting One for All at the age of 10! (I think that's when the first battle happened). |
Guest chapter 2 . 2/2 Interesting start. I'd recomend avoiding hard numbers on anything but character stats and skill levels. If Deku wants the real math, make him figure it out the hard way, don't let it bog down your writing. I'd also recommend Izuku planning out his "quirk" so that he could most easily pretend it's all the same mind boggling versatile and powerful fluke of genetics. This is Izuku the successful pro, he has years of personal experience, foreknowledge, and time to plan. His self designed "quirk" should reflect all of this. A quirk so broken that it has a hard counter to every major confrontation coming down the road. Adaptive mutation(the best is DC's Doomsday, the worst is Marvel's Darwin), Aura(RWBY), Quincy arts(Bleach), all seem like nice options. These are all powersets around a theme, that's what he should be focusing on. As an aside faking Adaptive Mutation while having Zenkai just seems funny. |
Westrannor chapter 2 . 2/3 Well, a good quirk that would start weak, but with a lot of training and science would be overpowered would be Magnetism. Start off being able to stick pennies together, and eventually reaching Magneto levels where he can shake the entire earth when he's pissed, or warp the magnetic field to the point of opening a portal. Regeneration quirks are always the prime way of getting powerful, and would go amazingly well with OFA when he first gets it, especially if it also regenerates his stamina/mana. Thanks for the chapter! Your story is one of the ones I'm most hoping goes beyond 10 chapters, Time Travel Game system. Plus with the whole point system you set up, if you ever reach a stopping point or get burned out on MHA, you could simply start the next playthrough somewhere else. |
Daisuke SSJ chapter 2 . 2/2 Gracias por el capítulo, Izuku Op OFA |
devildogg237 chapter 2 . 2/2 I say healing, I always loved the Berserk Healer thing. Hey he should also have Aura, be a pretty cool defensive perk. |
pedrojunior0922 chapter 2 . 2/2 The healing quirk sounds good, a permacopy quirk would be too much op |
Giltlawyer9000 chapter 2 . 2/2 Why not have Deku get Dungeon Keys? Keys that open Dungeons of high rank. Example: E, D, C,B, A S, SS, SSS, L Also could be: Undead, Goblins, Wolves, Orcs, Beasts, Demons, Dragons, Demigods, Undead Gods, Gods. Since Deku, is like an E category if he were pushed into a dungeon like rank C, he would be forced to use tactics and be pushed to the brink. It would be a good way for him to become OP, AND feel like he earned it. |
devildogg237 chapter 1 . 1/27 I’ll be watching this. |
Daisuke SSJ chapter 1 . 1/27 Espero con ansias el siguiente capitulo |
X chapter 1 . 1/24 Doesn’t seem too bad so I hope you update soon. |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/24 Yes |