Ah a very interesting chapter indeed. So the Imperial fleet is ready to attack Revan does this mean that this chapter takes place during the ending of Shadow of revan? Ooh that means that the real fun will begin soon.

And now she finally gets to scratch her itch. Just finished rereading the previous stories and I noticed so many connections and teases. Truly phenomenal writing.

good job keep up the good work lets hope keera doesnt lose her power because of her insolence

good job keep up the good work

Good writing, though some of the last few chapters have been a slog. Too many new plot elements when old ones are still unresolved.

I am curious about Keera's backstory.

This is a good opening chapter. I genuinely do not understand why you don't use dialogue tags properly after writing so long.

this should be intresting i cant wait to find out about keeras mothers past

Fuck synestra

good job cant wait for the next chapter

Good chapter enjoying the progress. Although I think Keera just needs to bang Ro and get it over with haha

good job cant for keera to uncover the mystery behind her mothers past

They were dead anyway after being "enhanced" cybernetic zombie children.

Hey I read all three of these stories in a single night . I really like them. Keera and Darth Avaryss are pretty interesting though I do gotta echo that they both need more unique traits to themselves to separate themselves if you are going for a split personality thing but thats a minor complaint . I hate Feer and hope he dies soon .

good job cant wait for the next chapter

nice chapter,, also have her take the droid to her company and have them replicate it. it just seems something a Sith lord would do if the droids gave Jedi a hard time.