Ignore catspats31, there is literally so much smut on here, worse than anything you could probably ever write. Don’t worry about that.

I love your story it was great. Keep up the great work. You are a great author.

While the writing quality of your story is good in terms of spelling and grammar, please note this part of the Content Guidelines:

"Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference."

You should remove all of the detailed descriptions of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature in this story if you want it to remain at this site, or upload it to a site where "Fiction MA" content is allowed such as Archive Of Our Own.

Geez you know how to write hot stories. The ending felt absolutely fine to me. I understand if you wanted to write more or expand on it, but for what it's worth, I feel that you delivered on the build up and the pay off between Anna and Elsa. Their chemistry together was sizzling. I can only imagine how great of a writer you'll be if you continue to keep improving with each chapter. You haven't disappointed so far. I love how into it you portrayed the two in this story. They are so cute and hot together and you wrote that so well. There is a bit of sadness to this story with them knowing it would be their last time together, and you did a great job making it worthwhile and give a sense of satisfaction and happiness. They'll still always be there for each other, and you wrote their love so well. Even with the incredibly written hot smut, you still made them adorable together. This story is fantastic, and you are fantastic.

Good story and I very much liked how you had it go but you could talk a little more haveing them be a little more dirty but that's my opinion

very good very good indeed and also so glad you plan on making a ch 2 for janitors closet

this is the hotest elsa and anna story ever .
please write more frozen sex storries ;)

I really enjoy this story ;)

I really love this hot story
verry hot

what a hot story you made ;)
iam so proud off that amazing job you did

Just like Anna, my reaction to this is: “wow”

I’m super impressed that this is only your second time at writing smut... because this is top notch. That was some good shit. It had everything I wanted in a smut fic! Fantastic descriptions, emotions, a clear context for the smut, and just all around ... hot. Great job. I hope you decide to continue this!

Wow really great one shot! I kinda even wish there was more chapters lol. Really love how you portrayed elsa and annas relationship here. Second time writing smut? Well let me just say you're pretty fucking great at it! Well done it sure had me going lol it was hot and cute if that makes sense lol
Cant wait for more stories from you :)