Reviews for The White Mage
Blue wolf blade chapter 37 . 7/29
I love this chapter. It was really interesting to read, I liked The whole vision thing with Callum and Kimaare.

And Soren buddy you need proper sleep. :-)

Rayla, you’re right Callum is too good.

Anyhow this chapter made my day. Enter next time.
Mateusz Weryski chapter 37 . 7/29
I really like that idea of yours about establishing the link only when the dragon is unhatched!
mdauben chapter 37 . 7/29
That was weird! I guess its good that Callum and Kimaare share this link, even if only so they could reassure poor little Mira. I hope everything goes smoothly for at least a while. It sounds like everyone could use some down time.
thedarkpokemaster chapter 36 . 7/28
Aww so sweet I just love all the sweet moments you do with the two.
Dragon Lord Draco chapter 36 . 7/24
You are not the last to discover through the moon. I've never even heard of it before now. But interesting dreams
Mateusz Weryski chapter 36 . 7/23
her looks in the leaked pages were mostly half asleep :v
krypo chapter 35 . 7/19
Honestly I cant wait for the next updates. Ever since I found this story it justs brings that excitment back when I first watched the series
ArthurWheeler chapter 35 . 7/16
As always delightful, I really enjoyed getting to hear lain reason with himself and continue to reconcile that his daughter loves a human. I also find it thrilling that Claudia is bent by a jealous rage as she gives the group chase it will also be interesting to see her next interaction with Aravos (if any) as she really is the rouge character at the moment no longer aligned with Aravos or Calum she really answers to no one by herself. I also love your great balance and as I call it a healthy dose of "Raylum sweetness". Well done. In the edge of my seat waiting for more! Thank you!
mdauben chapter 35 . 7/16
So Callum takes his next step on his quest to connect to all six Arcanum. I'm interested in seeing what it will be like in the Tidebound city? I just hope Claudia doesn't make too much trouble for them.
G-Sky chapter 34 . 7/12
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next on!
G-Sky chapter 33 . 7/12
I really liked this chapter. You description of the place was excellent. PLEASE keep writing!
Blue wolf Blade chapter 34 . 7/10
This chapter was a lot of fun to read. Oh Em Gee Claudia is escaping that cannot be a good sign. Five till four months. OK that is some serious time crunch they’re seeing as it did take two years to master two different arcanum’s. And you’re nearly up to 40 chapters Just around… Six more to go I’d say before you reached 40.

This Hass to be one of the longest dragon prince fanfiction I have ever read. And I am actually a big fan of long stories so keep up the good work.

I really enjoyed reading every single chapter it always makes my day.

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Guest chapter 34 . 7/10
Amazing
ArthurWheeler chapter 34 . 7/11
Thank goodness this is an active story I eagerly await the coming chapters. Thank you for your excellent work. I love the adventure thrill of this story. It's complex and dynamic with multiple character arcs under the grand epic scheme. Eagerly awaiting what happens next! Again I think you captured the true essence of the characters cannon. I really would be excited to see how you would lead your story to Rayla and Callum's wedding further down the line... But I am especially curious as to the consequences "he is one of them" seed planted in Lain's mind.
mdauben chapter 34 . 7/10
Not good! Aaravos will attack in just a few months, Claudia is free, and that jerk Amer is still sneaking around. I hope everyone can stay safe until Callum can finish connecting to the last two Arcanum.
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