| Reviews for The Wizard's Pleasure |
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mzsha18XX chapter 3 . 7/13 Very hot and I love the teasing. The way she expressed them buttons had me hooked. |
do not call me Nymphadora chapter 3 . 4/28 Holy effin fuck that was amazingggggg |
Robin1977 chapter 3 . 4/22 You have made my mind wander in a good way so enjoyed your work. I have followed and favorited you. |
Atrumnex chapter 3 . 4/18 This was so sweet. Sigh. The more fics I read in like gosh darnit. Where is my reformed death eater to love lol. Ty for writing this love fest |
DragonIris chapter 3 . 4/4 I absolutely love this! It is just like I like my bolognese and my coffee — hot and sweet! I love your incarnations of both Severus and Hermione and the dialogue. I have no problem seeing them both and what they do. Well done! |
Sharkdiver1980 chapter 3 . 3/14 So so good! |
Slytherclaw Black chapter 3 . 2/11 I'm heeeeere! I'm sorry I'm so late, babe. Severus being anxious is adorable. We gotta work on that self-doubt though. He thinks of her as "his witch". I am already melting! *heart eyes* And then you had to go make mention of kinky classroom role-playing. Good thing I already had this fan set to high! It is a gift ain't it, HG? Good on you for recognizing that his trust is the greatest gift that one can be blessed with. Now go get him, tiger! The way he talks about her lips! Perfection! Puddle of goo but I don't want to be anything else. I am sighing all over the place at her running her fingers along his face. Beautiful. Just beautiful. Lawd Hammercy! She is brilliant! This BJ scene is whoa! I should have brought a back up fan. *wonders if BD will let me borrow one* And then you had to go and prick my heart a bit. *sends patronus to BD* We are watching you, Dasher. *eyes widenLead me home H to BD to fall back* Of course he's not stupid. Never that, love. Never that. You are being so brave, Severus. We are swooning at his "dont guard your heart" speech! Swooning! I love this! Brilliant job, Dasher! Perfection! *grabs BD and heads straight for my pressie* Love you! Claw |
Slytherclaw Black chapter 2 . 2/11 How the hell was I supposed to ignore this? Dammit, Dash! that is yellin' but in the best possible way. Lemons you say? *snuggles down and grabs new fan I bought* I'm ready. Let us proceed. Points to Gryffindor? That had to have been one hell of a bj. More points! Whoa! A very powerful one indeed. hahaha I completely melt every time his speech is brought up. J.K. absolutely outdid herself with that magnificent bit of dialogue. I'm realizing that I melt a lot. It's you're fault so you deal with the puddles! Bewitch and Ensnare her Severus! I believe in you! *looks around awkwardly and calms self down* The fluff! 50 points! I LOVE IT! *glares murderously at anyone who tries to take your puff pills away* *gets distracted by that kissread to the part about tri-color lace. Flips switch to turn fan on* Woman! They have barely done anything and I am overheating. And I'm now lightheaded at imagining a Severus Snape on his knees. And then you had him say these dirty things! Pretty sure my heart stopped. I just knew you were trying to kill me. Knew it! Favorite line is absolutely "You will wait to lick this off until you are right at the edge." That is when I died and had to be revived. Right to the feels with the end. In the best way though. And then right back to the hotness. Whiplash! I revel in it.. Dash! So effing good! And here you go having me procrastinating again. For of my Love Claw in a neckbrace |
Slytherclaw Black chapter 1 . 2/11 I'm here. Sorry, I'm late. I actually read this last night when you posted but was too tired to leave the review I wanted to. So now I'm taking my happy ass right back to the beginning to read it again so I can review it. Not that I mind, of course. *scampers off to the beginning* Umm...first off. I want her outfit! And then we get to why she's seeking out our favorite billowing grouch. I admit to openly laughing when I first read it. God bless a Gryff for having the balls to ask. I absolutely agree with her guess and reasoning though. Very sound argument. My heart cracks a bit when he starts to answer before she even asks the question. Makes me wanna go around and poison all of the idiots who have called him those names. Even the Gryffs. I just absolutely adore how you describe his emotions throughout this. I feel it! *runs off to retrieve the fan I left in Vines reviews* Ok, I'm back. Let's do it to it. Woman! This is insanely hot! All of it. Every freaking second of it. The buttons! I feel you on a soul level HG. There's just something about those buttons. Favorite line goes to "I personally want to unleash the fire and hope I am the first thing in your path when you burn." Hot damn Dash! It's pretty adorable that she shushed him before he could speak. haha. And taking the coat! I'm irrationally jealous of that. I wanna snuggle and sniff and hollow in that coat. *pouts and stomps foot* This was just so much fun! Thank you for sharing it with us. All of my Love and Billows HotHappy Claw Out |
Devon A. Snow chapter 3 . 2/10 Dash! Your A/N already has me cracking up! How many times have you said you were done with a story and yet more keeps coming? Lol, just poking fun Dashling! Don't worry. I'm not going to starting chanting for more. Such a sweet ending to this little trilogy and a full HEA to boot! I am so glad I bought that extra fan because I needed it. DAYUM these lemons were on fire! Talk about releasing pent up passion! I will commend you because I thought many parts of it were true to real life. Everybody doesn't get off every time, and every time isn't perfect. Kudos on the gillyweed mimicking spell! That was something I hadn't come across before. Very ingenious. I bet all the males who ever read this fic are wishing that was a real thing. I'll be completely honest. I don't care that it all happened so fast. It was perfect and I loved it. Can't wait for your next project! Snow out |
Devon A. Snow chapter 2 . 2/10 Lord hammercy, Dash! I'm so glad that I am not the fan throwing type when I get mad during reviews because I NEEDED it for this story and it wasn't even the full lemon! Damn, woman, but you are talented with a keyboard. I loved everything about this one shot, I feel like that is a given, but I'm going to gush about all the things anyway. The scene at the beginning the trivia game style class period was so much fun to read and as a fellow swot and trivia junkie, I was especially thrilled. I could just imagine being there and trying to beat Hermione and Draco. It also gave me the giggles because I could imagine someone like McGonagall walking past the points hourglasses and watching all the points dropping in left and right. Then being shocked later when they realized that Snape had been the one giving out all the points. I freaking love reading about Snape doing wandless magic. I think it's because I find his hands extremely attractive. And just so much freaking power! *ShiversIs there any doubt that I am a Slytherin?) So when he pulls the chair around the desk and toward him, I just melted it. Such effortless power and grace. *DroolsI think I have problems.) And the rest of the story. HOTT. Yes, with two Ts. I can't wait to read the final piece of the trilogy. I bought an extra fan just in case. Snow |
Devon A. Snow chapter 1 . 2/10 Dash, I'm not going to yell. I wanted to, but I didn't want all my reviews to start of that way. I loved this. I felt a little teased TBH because this was NOT what I was expecting. I think I feel about how Hermione had to feel by the end of this: hot, horny, and ready to take off all her clothes. Or maybe that's just the rum talking. I don't know. I don't care. I'm just saying that I feel the girl's pain! There is a part of me that wants to pull a Moon and start chanting: SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! However, I do know how many other projects you are working on AND I know there are other lemons that will be fulfilled. So I will take my chanting away and be happy with this dear little one shot that you go so close to keeping under 5k. Probably would have been under 5k if you hadn't had to follow all the rules, but I'm still so proud of you! Merlin, this review is going to be as long as your story because I haven't even gotten to get into the detailed part of my review. This was just all preliminary stuff! Can I just say that I adore HG's outfit? I freaking love peasant blouses and I think they should be worn WAY MORE than they are. Unfortunately, it's getting a bit cold for them, but I bet she looked just divine, especially in green. I surprised he could keep his hands off her when the bottom rode up and exposed her skin. I can't but applaud his self control. Of course Severus is an au natural kind of guy. He's traditional and he has buttons on his trousers! He doesn't have to worry about getting caught in the zip. Which brings to mind another very personal question for Severus, but it's too racy to put here. Anyhoo, that line of HG's when she finds his fly buttons was hysterical. Just embarrassing enough to be adorable without completely breaking the moment. I loved the whole interplay between Hermione and Severus and her monologue about the buttons was just so freaking perfect! And Robert Frost! Loved that reference. You already know how I feel about the sexy bits. I don't think I have to reiterate, but I do want to say that I find it hilarious that HG took his coat. I found that whole bit to be "unreasonably entertaining". Alright, Dash. We have come to the end of my ridiculous review. Keep being awesome and amazing. Snow |
eminent04 chapter 3 . 2/5 Cute and good |
eminent04 chapter 2 . 2/5 Yes |
TPalesh chapter 3 . 2/2 This was so intense. Beautifully written! Thank you for sharing! |