Reviews for Unveiled
Guest chapter 1 . 7/12
Ok I'm trying hard to understand your story, but I just can't. I really dislike your Hermione Granger. I wanted Draco to tell her to fuck off. Draco deserves better shoot even Ron deserves better.
no-filter-chipmunk chapter 1 . 5/25
Loved this! Great story, great writing, all-in-all just... great! Loved the way you approached Hermione and Draco's relationship. Thank you for sharing your writing!
M. Cullark chapter 1 . 5/19
I don't think this Hermione deserves forgiveness, she was awful to Draco and even Ron, all because her commitment issues that she clearly needs to work out. But it's a Dramione fic so I'm happy about that, even though I don't think they're gonna last.

Keep writing, I told you before, you have talent.
xxKLxx chapter 1 . 4/19
This was great! Thank you.
Cali Dreamweaver chapter 1 . 4/9
I really enjoyed how Hermione realized that it's not the wrong man per se that makes her unhappy (well it was, with Ron), it was the institution of marriage (both times). Some people just don't want to get married, or don't want the traditional trappings that go with marriage, and that's okay. I'm glad that Draco seems to be okay with it too, at least so far. I hope they get to talk it out.
Iliedark chapter 1 . 2/29
ELLIOT WACKSPURT GREEN! How dare you take dad's computer and post troll revievs on a muggle spider webpage. Next time I see you twiddling your thumbs on anybodys muggle fiction, I will directly take your behind to Azkaban. There will be no Christmas sweets for you. *SCREAMS*
Oh and lioness dear your story is fantastic. *Lovely voice*
*howler shreds*
judyy143 chapter 1 . 2/19
Arghloved that. Great work
Daniel chapter 1 . 2/6
This was good, thank you.
pgoodrichboggs chapter 1 . 1/30
Glad she went back to Draco and realized that Ron was wrong for her.
Elodie chapter 1 . 1/28
Really enjoyed it! Love a supportive Draco.
natt123 chapter 1 . 1/29
Great story
belleepoque7 chapter 1 . 1/29
Loved it!
Stephanie O chapter 1 . 1/28
I don't blame Hermione for leaving Ron, but I'm surprised she actually went as far as the vows! This after their fundamental disagreement about his wish for her to stay home and keep house...just like his mum!? I am glad Draco took her in when she showed up on hos doorstep!
Charliesaurus chapter 1 . 1/25
Absolutely wonderful story ! You captured so much passion. Loved it !
SlytherinDrea chapter 1 . 1/24
Great story! Thank you for sharing!
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