Great story and much deeper than the original. Please keep writing, I look forward to more chapters.

I love it!*-*

Been reading and commenting on the other site, but found a few more chapters here to my delight. I do think elaborating on Minerva and Urquart would add value, but I hope you don’t kill him off soon. He can provide support to Minerva and be an ally to Sirius in the political field. Like this story a lot. Thanks for writing.

I like Alice and Amelia's conversation.
Alice using the hair skills Lily taught her on Amelia was very moving.
You meant for Xenophilius to say "same courtesy".

Wow! I was amazed! Especially the relationship between McGonagall and “Elf” since I am blank about who he is?
And I was nearly red glowing when Sirius and Susan’s aunt left the Greengrass house! He was directly insulting and rude! I am seriously hope that it is the Lovegood family is the one prophesied to be with the greater Caddington family!

I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

I really love your story but two things will snape be forgiven and will filius loss his memory

great story love this, please update this soon. definitely not expected story line.

I'm silently hoping for the moon - I've always been fond of Luna, and I'd like to see more of her, but I've got the feeling you're leaning towards the pasture.

I want it to be Luna to be part of the ‘Five’ even if I really don’t want her to loose her mom! It breaks my heart every time!
Though I am growing more and more attached to this story! I can’t figure out if the black and extended family intends to bow down to old Voldie or not! I hope not! I would rather see the family rule the whole world or wizard of world as it is! Love the whole Moony and Sirius partnership! And so glad that Harry will have such a strong network and family around him
Can’t wait for more chapters

Luna!

I love this story

AW! at the mental pic I jsut got of of little Neville in Sirius' arms.
AW! Poor distressed Flip!
I misread "want all hands on deck" as "want all wands on deck" when I read it the first time.
"reintroducing", "reintroduced" and "reintroduction" do not get hyphenated.
You meant "its quite considerable years".
Minerva wouldd have said "at its end".
Flip is never going to forgive Rot for disrespecting Remus. It made me laugh, the concept of a house elf bearing a grudge.
Sirius would have said "break your confidence".
Did you mean "announced her most recent pregnancy to their respective parents"?
Yum! at the mental pic I just got of Pandora Lovegood's handmade throw.
"halfway" should be one word.
I'm hoping with every fibre of my being for The Moon, jsut so Luna does not grow up as lonely as she did in canon.

I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

Remus would have said "great-great-grandfather's sister".
Your narrator meant "rein in their own hilarity".
The mental pic I just got of those angrily babbling toddlers is SO cute.
Ted Tonks' remark "At least we know who wears the robes in your marriage" made me laugh.
I own a fluffy winter dressing gown the colour and texture of yellow baby chicks and two towelling summer dressing gowns and a satin summer dressing gown. Even so, I have never understood the rationale behind dressing gowns at all.
What Alice was doing was "dumping the boy".
EW! I have hated warm milk for eons, probably since I was a toddler.
You meant you were "rereading".