Loved it, excellently done first chapter.

You have accomplished nothing with this fanfic. It's just pure trash and you as an author is a sex obsessed teenager who has a fetish for incest and self-insertions. Everyone who have given "positive" reviews on this fanfic are also guilty of such degenerative behavior and are likely incapable of distinguishing between a good fanfic and a piece of filth.

Delete this fanfic along with your account, as that would be the only sensible thing to do.

Oh that was some good sweet lemony filled sexy fun. I liked the touches of family life and can say Angie got the good end of a very sexy deal!

*"to an 'Incubus Marco' scenario (...)" Until the later chapters, at least, when Marco runs out of anything resembling a passing fuck... The way you always drive-home the egoistic, indulgent side of passion / Love, then keep twisting, is something I dread as much as savor. Always a treat finding an author that remembers how to make Forbidden Fruit tender and sweet, but watching it consume those partaking, perverting sacred bonds, is a sinful thrill in itself. The bonus MILF bookends (lovely Rita) was a treat too.

Oh yea we got some flashback fun hits at how wild Hpoo was at her sorority house. And we get Marco showing he's the jealous type. Oh man I need more cause this is getting wild. I wonder what else Hpoo has in mind to make their lives even sexier!

nice story.

What a way to end the story, from a great threesome to a perfect time skip. I really don't like stories for Marco is effing his mom, but when another girl is involved it's makes it okay for me to read and enjoy.

It's easy enough imagining Angie and Rafael being occasional swingers. They've always had a whiff of that comfortable, easygoing sensuality I keep coming back to your (best) stuff for. I could honestly see Marco getting used to it but growing-up thinking it's awkward as hell... Then feeling even moreso when his dad's response 'Incubus Marco' scenario is basically "buena mierda, hijo!" That said, as much as I like all the characters, I care about as much as Marco did in that particular story right now. I never expected to love this trio so fucking much...

Damn that was another hot threesome, and I always want to know how Marco and hekapoo met, and it did not disappoint. I kind of want to see a prequel of their relationship or just two of them

you almost had me thinking that you posted this chapter in another fanfic with how it started. you did great with this fanfic and, while i still hope for my request to be posted, i'll be looking forward to see what else you got for you fanfics.

Not a chapter filled with sexy fun but it does push forward where things will go!

This so wrong on so many levels...
He just married his mother.

Who is gonna get Rafael with?

Is Hekapoo a human?
WHERE'S STAR?!

Rafael is going to be very confused.

Angie.

You already had a baby in your life!
FOR FUCKS SAKE HIS DICK LENGTH IS IMPOSSIBLE!
(The average length is around six to seven inches with a girth)