I look forward to the next chapter.

Halo alpha has more on halo, it has been around longer.

i dont know if im correct but her motto may mean "the sky is hope" translated from latin

Thank you for the new chapter. I hope you continue to write more soon

The Epoch Carrier isn't balanced. It's one of the few ship classes at actually focused on being a Carrier, holding many Broadswords and Longswords over anything else. Sure she also carries marines, ODST, and ground vehicles like the other classes but it's not impressive to the Fighters compartment.
Her real means for offense is her Rapid-fire MAC and the twin Breakwater Heavy Naval Coilguns, 120 inch (3048mm) triple gun mount, meaning 6 barrels in total.

Update update update!

Ah! A fellow Ace Combat fan. 4 was my first and probably favorite and I did try and write a fic about it at one point... anyway.

So the biggest thing is yet again grammar. Many words in a sentence that were either the wrong from, from a precious form of a sentence, it seemed like, or it was just completely out there for whatever reason. I think I said this before but try putting it in Google Docs or Grammarly. It will help catch most things but you do need to read over and proofread it yourself or have a Beta do it.

Kinda wanted UNSC Enterprise to help them, not gonna lie on that, but I do feel like there is a reason you decided not to. Anyway, I look forward to more and can’t wait to see what the other UNSC ship is. coughcoughProwlercoughcough**

Id prefer the game really since it has some reference to actual historic battles.

marseldagistani,
Caelum Est Spe in english it mean ( The sky is the hope)

If only I knew what her Motto meant, that would be great. Anyway, I think your English has improved, from what I can remember anyway. Ya still got some Grammar goof ups to work on, but I'll give ya some slack since English isn't an easy language to learn. Hell, it's all I know and even I screw it up sometimes.

I can't wait for the girls to learn about the UNSC oath that all personal swear by. Blah Blah To Defend Earth and all her colonies. It will definitely put them at ease when it comes to here allegiances. The Covenant is going to be a hard one to swallow though, so that will be fun.

Does anyone know how many Epochs were canonically built? Cause I think that would be an interesting trivia moment, like say our Enty asks Space Enty if she has any sisters, Space Enty can then answer with however many were built before her destruction.

Love the chapter but is it possible to have shorter chapters with more frequent updates. I feel sometimes the story has been abandoned because there weren’t any updates in months.

Neat... UNSC crash ship hmm what her mysteries...

What does caelum est spe mean?

hey i know you said you were having issues with writers block but are you thinking of continuing the story or is it cancelled

CONTINUE...But try to improve your grammar. I shouldn't need a decoder ring to read this story.