Reviews for A Girl and Her Bike: Volume 1
djmegamouth chapter 7 . 10/16
I wont lie I dont like how you depicting ironwood here.
djmegamouth chapter 5 . 10/15
Thank you for not just writing a Adam gets stomped thing. Also my bumblebee ship is just gonna be harder after this chapter.
djmegamouth chapter 4 . 10/15
I've been loving this so far I just hope you keep giving everyone respect here.
djmegamouth chapter 3 . 10/15
A problem I have with the story so far is that aura seems to break way to easily. Just pointing that out it tends to be ridulously tough.
djmegamouth chapter 2 . 10/15
Alright im willing to let the Ursa major go, but it better not be some fic where humans are helpless to transformers. Also will you be keeping in mind that rwby actually has a lot of epic feats that make them more than capable of keeping up with transformers.
djmegamouth chapter 1 . 10/15
I kinda want to see Weiss or winter kill and than summon a decepticon. That would really be fucked up lol.
merendinoemiliano chapter 9 . 10/8
Pretty badass fight and good usage of Shatter, curious to see how things are gonna change further, trough I personally wouldn't relate Primus to the god of light( since, at the very least Primus gives a shit about his creations) and Ozpin... are we really talking about the man who put Amber into a vault without any kind of real defences? Good work aniway.
TheReckless1One chapter 9 . 10/7
I appreciate the inclusion of the Decepticon POV of the War. Now maybe well see if they actually believe it. So everything is thrown completely out of wack. Honestly I wouldn't be surprised that Ozpin shut Beacon down due to the current events for "Security Reasons". That leaves Cinder's plan, Blake's desertion, Amber's condition, Weiss's change of heart, and Salem's schemes all thrown into the trash. I LOVE IT! I was worried it would be a "This character goes to Beacon" story.

So I see you got a prequel fic. I find it f*cking hilarious that the destruction of Cybertron stems from an election. POLITICS SUCK UNIVERSALLY!Great chapter, To quote the great Erron Black
"What happens next? Hell if I know. And that's just the way I like it"
Z-King chapter 9 . 10/7
A dads got to do what a Dads got to do.
Mobian chapter 9 . 10/7
Winter destroyed Summer's car and threatened his Daughters. At this rate I'm hoping Taiyang sue her for emotional damage and threatening to hurt Yang and Ruby. Please tell me Kup will make appearance in this story because I want to see him dress down Winter for her actions. Seen as Kup is a Professional military bot and he would disapprove of Ironwood action. I can see in cannon Adam burning Letters from Blake's Parents and lying about it. It's always been about control for Adam.
nindjo chapter 8 . 9/27
there's a difference between taking over security after a proven treat launched a major attack and trying to remove your close ally and fellow secret keeper against the salem form power. and even after that he was still closely working with ozpin and willing to take advise this ironwood if betraying his friends because he's hoping for people he's never met and never even talk to and willing to start a war with another country. also the level of racism that atlas is throwing out is just plain unreal a large part of atlas is faunus and the military has faunus members the idea even if it comes form scared faunus themselves that they would shoot a child for not being human goes to far. i realy like the conscept of this story and what and how you write up to you in the end but i just can't take the atlas crew
serious when there acting this stupit.
TheReckless1One chapter 8 . 9/27
So Yang is in her Volume 4 personality without someone chopping off her arm. Blake is getting the battered spouse treatment, really hoping Adam gets disintegrated or melted after reading that. Ruby is dealing with a social awkwardness that makes me want to psychoanalyze her. Winter's been Black Op'd with Robophobia. The Decepticons are Palpatining the planet with Sienna, Ironwood, and Salem. All and all, an excellent story. Can't wait for Weiss to get dragged in this, hoping she gets herself a nice racecar that transforms into a large hotheaded robot. Perhaps Penny can get an upgrade to where she does't need a revive from her dad potentially killing him everytime she gets left in the washing machine, say some Cybertronian Spark magic?

With the Cons having a sizable Fascist empire and the Bots being much more of a rebel remnant faction, I'm wondering what universe your basing this off of; like Bayverse (oh god please no) or Transformers Prime mixed with Beastwars. I would be interested in seeing the Con's explanation of their rise to power from their point of view, perhaps this would be a good way to give Winter some (biased) exposition. I take it that the Vital festival and Salem's plans are gonna go differently. Is Salem actually a threat to these guys at all? Like I know she can't die and got magic but she'd have to battle hundreds of giant robots with several eons worth of experience and scientific research. I'm sure Shockwave could find a "logical" solution like slapping her into a cryogenics tube and throwing her into a black hole.

Excellent work. Follow and Like button has been hit.
merendinoemiliano chapter 8 . 9/27
Pretty nice chapter overall, the nightmare was very cool and I can't wait to see what will happen in Beacon. Is that lately I'm also very biased against Oz because, let's be honest, he's an antiquate fool who should never be the leader of the Huntsmen. Good work.
Z-King chapter 8 . 9/26
Oh, I see what you are doing for Primus and Unicron now.
Mobian chapter 8 . 9/26
Now you have me curious on who are the Ace Ops Decepticons counterpart? No Winter, you never agree to go rouge. You be hunted down by Vale and if anything to wrong Ironwood can blame you for the problem. Also Dream on Winter because everyone knows that Beacon is the best Huntsman academy. So are we getting unofficial Team RWBY before they go Beacon. We're just missing Weiss. Hopefully Blake will defect from the White fang and join her true team. I hope that Akai feel better. No one deserve to be bully because they are different.
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