When I started this story I expected something really different. It's pretty good story and Kali is a lot more sinister than she first appeared. I get the feeling that Jan is gonna be flashing that .38 of hers.

Man, Jaune's acting like a little bitch, wtf, dude.

In this story, I get the feeling that Jaune is the type of friend who would give Blake a bat and insist for her to "beat the idiot out of him".

This story is sick (it’s so good),you should be ashamed of yourself (you should feel good for coming up with this).I feel dirty just looking at it (I can’t stop reading it).I hope I never see this terrible story ever again(I read this in two hours and I can’t wait to see what happens next). And I hope you get this message and stop writing this monstrosity(And I hope you continue this beauty of a story of forbidden love,drama and betrayal).

The first part if this chapter was good; it was quite nice to see Saphron not give a cliche "this isn't worth it" tier for a speech
The Kali part...not so much. You've effectively turned her into the Cinder of this story.

This chapter really disappointed me, to be honest.

It felt as if there would be a complicated situation where Kali wasn’t... reduced to someone who would take any young boy, just for pleasure.

It made her go from a character, that to me, could’ve been morally gray and dealing with issues of love... but now? Now she’s just become a villain to hate.

Jan! Don't go down that alley way! It's not safe! This is hurting my heart as it is! (This is a damn great story. I tried doing a story years ago but it was just too damn edgy and got a lotta hate for it. But wow! I can't wait for the next chapter!)

So Jaune's mind is breaking. He no longer knows what to feel because he's being overcome with lust do to the rape, it would help if could think clearly but Kali's not giving him that chance. What Jaune is beginning to experience is the dangers of stockholm syndrome which applies to more then just kidnapping. I only found and read this story today so I can say that I wasn't expecting such an innocent and cinnamon roll Jaune for this type of story, which is why I don't want the relationship to succeed as you have written something a bit too realistic and I'm just hoping Jaune gets out of this as undamaged as possible, his moral compass is already starting to shatter.

Love your story so far keep up the good work

Next chapter can we get focus on Blake.

Her tail? do Blake and Kali have tails in this, usually they just have the ears.

Lol, she probably thought it was a veeerry interesting stituation.

god damn your left hand is talented... sorry just had to make that

your stories always remind me of my frustrations, but at the same time they also remind me how no matter how bad life has gotten for me before or now it can always get better, it's just up to me to persevere through like I always do.

I do enjoy the Jaune/RWBY stories don't get me wrong lol. Jaune's my boi!

Does Jaune have something against being with Blake or Blake in general, I mean he's fucking her mum, so why is he so against being more than friends with Blake who is just a younger Kali, I don't get it.