Reviews for The Darkness of Day
Irakli Chargazia chapter 44 . 7/24
Omg just can't say with word
PAT2024 chapter 44 . 7/23
Great chapter. I loved the wedding, the speeches and the official integration of the 3 Galeron children into their Targaryen family.

It was very lovey/dovey and fluffy, but they needed that (as much as we did), before the storm that’s no doubt coming.

Keep up the good work. Can’t wait for the next update. Thanks
Perseus Apollyon chapter 44 . 7/23
Storyline with less fluff? Idk about that fam, I love the fluff. Moments like this chapter are worth gold, just considering...well everything. I know I've also been on your ass about the new Targaryen kiddos and getting then legitimized, but you did such a awesome job, and so ends the name Galeron. Good riddance. I dont know what I liked more, the kids becoming Targaryens, or the actual wedding which was pretty cool mixing of different cultures. The wedding speeches were awesome, and everything was just so great. You blew it out of the water with the unexpected declaration for Nesara, Mae and Zaevar Targaryen, along with lol Eleana snitching on Jon and leaking all his plans. Come on girl! I love Eleana too, but she needa stop snitching. I also legit thought Nesara lost Scaley? That was the name right? But of course, bless that girl, it was her pet animal. One thing I definetly dont get is what angle Brans playing at. I dont think that letter was any nobles, firstly addressed as the Nobles of Kings Landing...like the ones that got torched? They have an entire nation filled with advanced sorcery, dragons, an army, newer tech...not much newer but still better than Westeros if they are baking cakes and having dessert tables, like seriously. Who the fuck are these guys threatening?. Either way, great work, loved every bit of this chapter. Hope Tyrions ass gets some leftovers...haha
tonywarrior chapter 44 . 7/22
Como siempre me encanta, ya veía venir el conflicto con westeros( XD como si no lo supieran todos jaja) es .al construir un Imperio tendrán sus altos y bajos, era cuestión de tiempo, ahora a prepararse para la guerra.. cua do saques la nueva historia espero ser de mos primeros en leerla, te mando un saludo y nos leemos en el siguiente capítulo.
anarchyXqueen chapter 44 . 7/21
Such a great chapter and as always, I can’t wait until the next one! I find myself looking forward to the updates and I cannot wait to see where you take it!
Lillian81 chapter 44 . 7/21
Oh my god they’re married and they made the other kids Targaryens and oh my god love it so much! Screw Westeros! They should be so lucky if Jon and Dany went back
Umbrakinetic chapter 44 . 7/21
This story is incredible. Usually I find wedding scenes remarkably droll but the amount of buildup to this and how well you've done establishing the characters have me so emotionally invested in this.

You should probably post the T rating though. There is definitely too much sexual content to be not rated M.
DarylDixon'sLover chapter 44 . 7/21
Great chapter
MayaFaya chapter 43 . 7/21
These two part chapters are going to be the death of me. I swear if I can't get this wedding today or not I'm going to jump out a window. I absolutely love this and you're doing a great job. So happy both Jon and Dany could take a bite out of Tyrion before their wedding - don't let that imp ruin their day! Can't wait for the next update!
MiaMia chapter 43 . 7/21
Ooooh, I'm so excited for the wedding! I think Davos being adorable with the kids was much-needed - he really was an unproblematic man! Gotta love him. Can't wait to see what happens next. Also really starting to like Eleana as a character. At first she was just a handmaiden but I feel like you've really shown how much she's grown as a person and as a friend to Dany. It's sweet to see such a transition. Update soon!
redlox2 chapter 43 . 7/21
This story honestly was pretty confusing for me since I only really knew about the Westeros side of the GOT world but this really helped clear it up for me thanks! I love Davos one of the few honest to God good people in that forest Ken time period!
Herraidous chapter 43 . 7/20
This chapter was good. You are really portraying Tyrion as three-dimensional, which is good. He's not vindictive or evil here, but put anyone in his situation and they're going to be emotionally ... scrambled. The interaction with the children was good. Looking forward to this week.
chrisye1999 chapter 43 . 7/18
This is one of the best fanfictions i've ever read. I finished the entier thing in a day, please update soon.
PAT2024 chapter 43 . 7/16
Thank you for updating so quickly. I most of the time read only stories which are « complete », because it’s so frustrating to enjoy a good story and never see updates coming or if they come they are so sparse that you loose interest.

So I am very happy that you are not this kind of author, but one who provides great story lines and very regular updates.

Great chapter. So happy that Davos is back in your story. I really love his character.

And Tyrion got the beating he deserved. Well done.
PAT2024 chapter 42 . 7/16
Great chapter.

Well, the negotiations with the free Cities went a bit too smoothly may be, but having Davos and Tyrion arriving just before their wedding, that’s not nice ! You could have let them at least enjoy this precious moment ... They deserved it.

I hope they will put both of them in the dunjons and deal with them right after the wedding. They shouldn’t even let Tyrion speak in the first place. Let them be wed already.

I hope the parallel you made between the cascades in the North and the cascade near the volcano, will stop there... nothing can break them away now, not even Tyrion fu—g Lannister.

I hope you’ll upload the next chapter as quickly as you are used to, you can’t leave us hanging there for too long.

Thanks a lot for the hard work.
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