Wow this was a great read. Thanks! :)

So, I think you broke my poor little heart. It's dead now and it's your fault.
Anyway, truly a good story.

Definitely underrated story and I love it!

Feedback: how did Ellie know the existence of ice cream? In Halcyon its called Rizzo's Partially Emulsified Semi-Frozen Milk-like Dessert (Dumb ending)

underrated story bro

please, please, please let there be a happy ending. I don't know if my heart could take it otherwise.

god damn the twists 'n turns. much like the captain, my heart can't take much more.

Omg this story is amazing! Can’t wait for the next chapter!

Awesome chapter man!

Yj

Oh this is that good shit! Ellie was my favorite playing the game, so glad you got her personality down perfectly. Great work!

I love this. I’m still working my way through the game myself but only recently thought to look for stories on FF. I’m glad I found yours. It’s also a crying shame that there aren’t more than 6 Outer Worlds entries on the site and most I don’t want to read for fear of spoilers. I did think that for yours also but decided it was too good to stop halfway. Keep doing what you’re doing bud!