Jesus. That was hard. There's a tightness in my chest now. I'm not sure I understand why Marinette agreed to be Mouse, though. Seems... impulsive of her.

Why oh why must this end on lukanette

Ugh no i didnt realize that was all. Now im sad your story was so good

Please dont abandon this story i need to read more

I also couldn't help but notice that even when Cat Noir is trying and Multi-mouse isn't, that she still beats him. Is that a note on her superiority, even outside of her regular powers or his lack of skill?

Lets get the something out first: It was a good story and one that I did enjoy.
I think you played the characters close enough to canon that any deviations were acceptable in the given situation.
On the grammatical side, in this last chapter when you talked about sharing kisses, I was unsure for most of them to what degree in intensity. The only one you mention is the kiss on the hand. On the others I was unsure. Were they on the cheek like how it can be done between friends, on the lips, a familial on the forehead? I was uncertain and a quick edit could solve that. Or it could just be me missing cues.
In terms of story, like I said, I liked it. However I do feel that while Adrien is for the most part a ball of sunshine, he should still have a little bit of salt in his personality. No a lot mind you but a bit, as he has shown some jealousy in canon. Not a lot but a bit, as a good way of denoting growing maturity. Most people swing too far and make him too domineering but I think that you may have made it a touch too forgiving. Not enough to deter from the story but a bit. But that's just me.

The point of contention being that LB was willing to tell Luka her secret identity before the partner she claims to trust. That just feels like it would sting more then LB and Viperion being in a relationship. The that LB would trust Luka of Noir.

But like I said, I did enjoy it.

Poor kitten...

Woah. Marinette and Adrien have some classes together and talk yet she's dating Luka! Never new the time would come...
P.S. Love the story it's beautiful so far!

I hate it when the fandom pretends Adrien is blind or that he’s at any fault when it comes to the adrienette ship. The biggest obstacle standing in Adrienette’s way is simply Marinette and her lies. Adrien has no fault in it. He’s nice to her , he’s ready to do anything to make her feel comfortable and happy around him ( he said those words in puppeteer 2) . He’s always there for her and he honestly asked her about her feelings more than once and she lied. He went the extra mile and asked her if she’s lying but she still lied. It’s not his fault that she fears rejection and doesn’t like to put herself out there. What is he supposed to do ?call her a liar and force her to confess? Pretend that she didn’t tell him he’s not a good friend and that she barely likes him as a human and that she’s just a fan ? Adrien already put himself out there with Ladybug more than once and endured the pain of getting rejected over and over. He did what he had to do for his love and he did all he could and still she didn’t want to give him a chance he respected her wishes and tried to move on. He proved himself time and again even when Ladybug looked down on him. Why should I blame him for something that’s not his fault in any way?
Marinette has only herself to blame here when it comes to her love life.
Adrien is not blind. He’s actually quite perceptive even though he was socially locked in house all his life and was only allowed a social life in the recent year and even then it’s a restricted social life with not enough freedom. He noticed Gabriel and Natalie getting close. He noticed Marinette might have feelings for him and asked her about it three times and she LIED. He asked her if she’s lying and she still lied. It’s not Adrien’s fault. Marinette told him “ you’re not a good friend to me “ and “ I barely like you as a human “ and made the poor boy think he did something wrong or that he’s a bad friend when he has been nothing but supportive and loving towards is a celebrity and it’s completely normal to have a room full his posters and pictures if you’re a herself told him she’s just a Adrien starts to assume girls are in love with him just for that then the whole town might very well be in love with him as well️
People forget Adrien is a famous celebrity and a super model. He’s a celebrity it’s normal to feel flustered and act nice or fan girl around him. I know Married women who act like Marinette around their K-pop crushes.
Adrien guessed she’s Ladybug two times already when her own parents couldn’t recognize her. So the argument of the hair and eyes is completely invalid and stupid when her own parents can’t recognize her. Yet Adrien ( the supposed blind and dense one figured it out twice! ) He also sees Ladybug in her since season 2 where he called her an everyday Ladybug in front of the whole class. But yet again Marinette can’t for the life of her see Adrien in Cat Noir’s kind and selfless acts. Heck they joked in the same day the exact same joke and yet she was blind to it too. They are both allergic to freaking feathers and reacted to it in the same freaking episode. When Adrien twisted his ankle to save Ladybug Marinette didn’t even think twice when Chat Noir showed up having the exact same injury that day and how Adrien was no longer in the spot she hid him. Alya photoshopped Adrien as Cat Noir and told Marinette how similar they looked but Marinette was too blind because of how much she puts Adrien on a pedestal but looks down on Cat Noir , she refused to see Cat Blanc was calling her Marinette after she delivered the gift to Adrien as Ladybug but signed it as Marinette, it didn’t even occur to her that Cat Noir discovered her identity because he was Adrien. She instead thought Adrien would spill her secret to other people till it reached Cat Noir ️ I can’t believe she thought that lowly of Adrien because of how blind she is.

Cute but please tell me that the story isn’t finished?!

Now that is bittersweet. Talk about a conclusion to Multimouse Week... your writing is excellent and this really tugged my heartstrings. I look forward to reading more of your writing!

Damn it, why are my eyes watery?!

ouch.

I should probably feel bad for Chat, but I just feel smug(?) or something.

I just feel bad that he's maybe falling for Marinette though she's taken. Maybe it's gonna end with his heartbreak? I just hope this story actually has an end.