God am i glad i found these stories of yours.

Heh i like that doki doki reference.

Taylor is too forgiving - I'm out. She is completely cool with being mind-raped by Victoria. She doesn't want to hurt or at least sue Emma, who tortured her for 2 years and then tried to cruelly kill. I can't identify with such inhuman monster, incapable of feeling normal emotions.

...did Taylor actually fuse with an overly idealistic Jedi? Becuase she's acting literally nothing like herself so far, essentially forgiven Emma immediately, is suddenly very open and outgoing to make friends, placing a lot of trust in authority figures, and is being incredibly idealistic, the fuck?

Fucking really? You are really telling me that Taylor is so interesting that capes naturally trust her and are friends with her straight away? And that might just be the worse cape name for Taylor I've ever seen.

The fuck is this crap? Gets a Sith in her head, then proceedes to do virtually nothing with the force, and acts like the jedi-est jedi who ever jedi-ed. And apparantly capes love hanging out with Taylor for no reason, of course Vista hangs out with a random person in the street, of course Victoria decides to randomly hangout with the boring new kid at school. The fuck? Real bad case of people treating the main character like they know they're the protagonist in a story, no fucking reason for them to be so overly friendly and open with -what is to them- some random stranger.

Welp, what an optimistic picture of the immediate future.

Great job on this chapter!

whoa

Hmmm... some curious hints of something... also all the interesting implications. I seem to recall hearing somewhere that Ravager and Mouse Protector had been connected in some way, though whether they were aware or not is debatable. The dynamic and irony hinted at here makes a lot of sense though, especially considering that they clearly have the same power but just different expressions.

Coil being his usual bad boy self, of course, and the thing about the 'meteor'... does that have something to do with Darth Occulus or SW in general? The Ruby Dreams Casino thing made more sense then canon actually in that it couldn't have possibly been an ABB complete establishment. It would have been found out by authorities much faster otherwise. Hmmmm... it sounds like Cheri made her search for Jean-Paul much sooner and managed to actually find him pretty quick. How will things go now that she didn't stupidly try to master the S9 by herself in some sole crusade against Heartbreaker? Poor Dinah of course is still suffering but thankfully without Coil's complete attention this time. It sounds like herself and her power are under much more strain.

Come to think of it, I always thought that it was pretty stupid that nobody in her family could figure out she had powers until it was too later considering her cousin Rory was Triumph of the Wards.

Well. I certainly liked that. Favorited in hopes of it encouraging you to write more P

But seriously... i cant wait till she finds out how to utilize the force and goes all Sorcerer on them. Maybe even some parahuman ghosts given that Occulus seemed to major in ghostbinding. Oh boy if she gets to grow she will be a nightmare. lol

Thanks for the chapters~

SYMPA
MERCI POUR LA LECTURE

Interesting scene and chapter!

wow

Interesting... though lol, Dean overplayed his hand there and put his own id at risk for someone who is already proving to be a problem with untenable baggage.