I had way too much fun reading this. The gags were just MUAH.

Thanks for writing this, it really made my day

This isn't especially well written, but good god was this fun to read

This was absolutely hilarious, I hope to see more of your amazing work.

A genuine delight to read. Thank you for the free smile on a Thursday.

I was wrong

20/10

10/10

Jaune was The Godfather of Beacon.

Great story

Wow this got me close to my usual sleep time (6 in the morning lmao), so thanks for the excellent time killer.

Noticed you haven't posted since January so hope you're doing well, thanks for the read.

An absolute unit this one is. I love all your work and i hope u stay safe during these times man *or woman idk lmao

"His pencil broke."

OUTFUCKINGSTANDING

Oh shit Ruby's an addict. This is a wonderful microcosm of criminal empires like Breaking Bad translated to children's stories like Economy of Recess from the cartoon Recess using stamps or Contemporary American Poultry from Community with Fried chicken. Very good. And Penny is awesome. I find it funny when Blake of all people lost to Jaune. Fucking hilarious. This is some seriously good stuff.

His was a great story that made me wish there's more of it. Even with the malicious trio (accidentally) foiled and caught, Salem is still out there and still had other pawns than just those three. Anyway, the characrerization and interactions were amazing, especially that little bit of symbolism at the end. *snap* goes Jaune's pencil... for the very first time.

Respect the hustle. That's all needed to be said.

I absolutely loved this.