Reviews for One in a Hundred
Azure Shine chapter 1 . 5/18
great story
Beetle126 chapter 1 . 3/27
Good story
Guest chapter 1 . 3/1
Very interesting! The summary doesn’t do the story justice
thebooklover27 chapter 1 . 1/23
Love it love it love itttt!
writeringoodfaith chapter 1 . 1/21
This was absolutely perfect. I loved this idea! I never would’ve thought of a time turner gimick like this and it is so so perfect for Jily. Because it’s all the character growth of James and the softening of Lily all at once. But I love how in character they were the whole time. Like when he did the same things, he got the same results. And when he changed, she changed. But not in a way that was ludicrous - her touch of insecurity about his constant asking out and whether he was ever genuine was added so perfectly. My FAVOURITE part though was how he kept trying to tone down the flirting during the long conversation because he realized that this is what he liked best with Lily - it was such a genuine moment of the goodness that is James Potter shining through. Special mentions to their conversation making me laugh in many places :)
I am so down for your one shots! Yay! Keep writing!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/21
Beautiful! Love it ! ️️
cscs01 chapter 1 . 1/20
Loved it.
Wish James tells Lily this story sometime.
Feux follet chapter 1 . 1/19
I loved your story, the way both of them are changing and growing after each conversation. I particularly liked the end, when they both listen at each other, instead of yelling. I also liked the way James let Lily have space, in the end, and the way she cares for him, as well as he for her ... Thank you for your work, it was beautifully written!
TrueHomiePiP chapter 1 . 1/19
I love everything about this. I really enjoyed the detail and thought you put into it. Even though it happens within the span of a day (I think? :S), it doesn't feel like a quick fix, and I love the distinction you make between realJames and appearancesJames. You've done such a great job! \o/
Zinzino chapter 1 . 1/18
Very good story! I love how he grows up in an hundred same discussion, it's sexy (ask Lily if you want a confirmation)