Reviews for Break
imeneiamasf chapter 1 . 6/6
daaaaaaaaamn i love this and the fact that you didn't make Donna a victim and as always writing it so beautifully like really ,and there a few fanfic writers that follows the actions of the characters with their personality ,and this on is one them so thank you
Fezzes chapter 2 . 2/17
It's a great chapter, really, but I think this is supposed to be a continuation of your Story "Worthy" and not "Break". Am I right?
Guest chapter 2 . 2/17
Is this supposed to be the second chapter of Worthy? Otherwise, I’m confused!
quietbeautie chapter 2 . 2/17
I'm in tears!...
Jessicaa1567 chapter 1 . 2/8
This was amazing ! You’re such a beautiful writer!
Follow-ur-Shadow chapter 1 . 1/20
This is so heartbreakingly amazing! I feel like this is the only plausible explanation as to why Harvey would ever cheat and you wrote both he and Donna's reactions so well!
Bellesrad chapter 1 . 1/19
Incredible writing! I’m not going to lie, I read with one eye closed because I didn’t know what to expect. Yet once I read the whole thing I was left mesmerized at the beautiful approach of this OOC moment for Harvey. You were great at crafting all the angst and providing us with those very well in-character moments towards the end, which were so genuinely in tune with our favorite characters and how they’d come to resolve this issue, had it ever been the case.
Thank you for giving us a different and enjoyable view and saving koalas/kangaroos in the process. Not all heroes wear capes!
southsidesister chapter 1 . 1/19
Wow! This story is so incredible and still so them and I don't think it's OOC for Harvey at all. Wonderfully written!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/18
WOW. I was excited to read this and it was 10 times better than I had anticipated. Fascinating and extremely well written, moving and just the right balance between devastating and hopeful. WOW!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/18
Wow! This was beautifully written! Even though it seems ooc for what was portrayed on Suits, what happens in the end is very much Harvey and who he has developed in to. Props for taking on such a hard prompt!
hermi1907 chapter 1 . 1/18
Fck him.i always thought harvey doesnt deserve donna. Sorry not sorry
LOVE DONNAism.
saci chapter 1 . 1/18
Yes this was technically ooc but it's also beautifully written and emotional and made me feel things and I wouldn't ever want it to happen to them but if it ever did, I could see it happening like this. You can write ooc scenarios but still have the characters remain in character in these situations, you know what I mean? Anyway, thank you for sharing.
Therealmanagingpartner chapter 1 . 1/18
let me just say I'm crying my eyes out. it was so emotional and honest. of course I'm kinda conflicted with the storyline because obviously it's hard to imagine but I was able to see this kind of behaviour on Harvey's side. however, I'd be heartbroken if it was "real", and Donna would've forgiven Harvey so easily. I just feel like Donna's character wouldn't allow her to let this go by her and just forgive him. I wouldn't want her to, anyway. this is not my typical ff but yet you managed to make me weep like i haven't in a long long time.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/18
I applaud you for taking the risk but it fell short. This whole premise and reasoning was not that well thought out. I did not feel Harvey or Donna in your writing.
Specter-Paulsen chapter 1 . 1/18
This is a beautiful piece. It’s real and it’s raw and it does feel like them entirely. You’ve done a wonderful job with it and I loved reading it even through the pain that radiates out of it.
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