This was very cute, more so than any other story you've posted so far. You did a good job portraying the relationship between Ash and Holly, really sweet. The paragraph with the Plump Rabbit was pretty funny.

This is the most wonderful father son story I have ever written.

This was really sweet! The fatherly side of Holly was strong and believable. I'm glad I could be of assistance. I can't wait for your future ideas.