| Reviews for Why Cant I Just Live In Peace |
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   I'am Vermillion chapter 1 . 8/14 I NEED PETION TO MAKE DARK NARUTO |
| Anikong chapter 1 . 7/31 This story has such a good premise but I was extremely disappointed with Naruto's subpar reaction. His wife AND unborn child were killed but he didn't even kill Zeus or Ares. He just yelled at them and threw a few punches. I mean the the Gods appear to like Naruto more than Zeus and Ares and killing them would have been justified. It felt like you let both Zeus and Ares live just so that you could still have canon PJO happen which was too much of a plot device and made this first chapter a real letdown. |
| TheHiddenWolf chapter 1 . 7/28 I dig it! It has a good beginning, and drew me in enough to make a review. Of course I’d love to see more. |
| M2R chapter 1 . 7/28 interesting... i thought he would be more mad. let zeus die, nobody miss him lol. |
| FI. nanamaka chapter 1 . 7/10 Master piece |
| Dark spirits chapter 1 . 6/25 Can’t wait for next update |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/14 Siguiras o la daras en adopcion tu fanfiction |
| BigBoySpartan chapter 1 . 4/11 Great start looking forward to more |
| Yami-Guy chapter 1 . 3/27 You killed my wife! But you can live because plot armor! Gonna be honest, my own grammar notwithstanding, this is some serious bullshit. I really cant see any redeeming qualities of the outcome of this chapter. The reactions of the Gods also felt...really damn hollow. |
| Hoguie chapter 1 . 3/19 I don't know man, it seems like Naruto's reaction was underwhelming. He just lost his wife and unborn child, and he's going to simply take some time off? That's like your boss shooting and killing your family, and then telling you to take a week off. It dosen't really mesh. You're writing is pretty good, but I would shift that last part around a bit if you want to continue this. Either way, I enjoyed reading this, and I wish you good luck in your future writing. |
| agnar chapter 1 . 3/15 the main question is, why the fuck did they stop naruto from beating Zeus to death? Everyone's lives would be better without the paranoid retard. |
| Sharkboybeast chapter 1 . 2/26 just dont, not with this story. |
| monsterkillers124 chapter 1 . 2/5 is this a one shot |
| NazgulBelserion chapter 1 . 1/28 You should have him go dark I hate stories where shit like this happens and person just takes it like oh I'm so sad I'll grieve and that's it no HAVE HIM CHANNLE HES INNER UCHIHA MADARA THE WORLD |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/23 Really that's it? Just slightly beat up Zeus and Ares, what a let down. |
