Brooooooo. This is FIRE! What a great start. I love how you mentioned the diary as if thats going to be in play later. Danny can just grab the diary no problem sooooo. Anyway, Marinette and Danny seemed engrossed in each other. Im guessing thats just from curiosity, but could it be loove? Nah, that’d be lame... unless? Danny living with Master Fu just works and I live for it. I love how you inject Danny who runs on his secret identity in worlds that revolve around secret identities. Its like secrets2. Is really entertaining! I’m just aching for the next chapter. Have a great day, author.

so is it a rewrite? if it is, I love the new start, it would have been better by making it longer, but this restart was fine.

Restart I’m liking it soo far but why the change ?

Well, while I enjoyed thus the first time I have to admit this was definitely a stronger start. I'm excited to see the changes you've made!

I don't know how to best discribe this story, but its interesting none the less so keep up the good work. The one cerection I'd make is that drying should've been driving (just wanted to point that out.) The only advice I can give is for you to take your time and have fun along the way for we the readers are with you.

Can Danny get new abilities by wearing once a miraculous ?

I get what your saying I look forward to rewrite hope you have great year.

Not gonna I have to agree with you there

I have to agree that while Adrien has a kind heart, his most kindness is like a carved mask that his fatger forged into him. And he's too naive to know what to do in real world outside the celebrity world.

Yeah, now that you mention it he kind is the dumb blonde. I mean he’s smart and all, but I bet that even Chloe wouldn’t recommend Adrien’s advice. If there was poll of whose the worst bully I’d say most would vote for Lila since she’s done WAY more mean stuff than Chloe has.

Good to see your alright and fine and if you’re gonna rewrite a few things then maybe be a good idea that chat/adrien doesn’t see the similarities between danny and his alter ego I’m not trying to be rude it’s your story which is awesome by the way I’m just trying to make a suggestion because I think it’s too soon for the similarity thing

I was just commenting that previous made sense to me I could see adrien starting to have suspicions about danny's secret thanks for this chapter have great month.

I agree with what you're doing here and I see no problem on your little rant and having to work with the rewrite.

Nice to know, and those are good reasons to make your story react to a character a certain way. It's cool, I just don't have any legs to stand on, so to speak, because of never watching the Miraculous series. Also if you haven't read them and you have time to, GothMoth is a very interesting DP ao3 writer. Legless on Maim and Crown Inn Jewels, sorry for advertising, I just love their work and I thought I'd share it with another great writer.

Okay, that just wasn't fair. I get that this is a Danny/Phantom x Marinette/Ladybug story, but this chapter was just borderline bashing Adrian/Chat Noire, he doesn't deserve that kind of abuse. How was he supposed to know physical attacks wouldn't work on Boxy, he's just another akuma to the Parisian duo. Then you go and basically make him seem like the least intelligent citizen in Paris, when he shouldn't be considered such, cats have amazing flexibility and reflexes. Marinette's just as clumsy if not more so in some cases. Point is, Adrian doesn't deserve being bashed and hated like this. A fanfic can have two good guys with only one being chosen for a pair.