YES OMG YES I AM IN LOVE. ENRAPTURED. You are wonderful and this fic is wonderful. Thank you for writing this xxxxxxx

I'm kinda glad they say no, she should get a taste of life before having to make a choice.

God hes SUCH AN IDIOT lol Edward frustrates me like no other... also this story feels like it's going so fast noooo.

I wish there was more interaction with the whole family, I don't really feel connected to them in this story so much. Also really want her to find out their secret, her n edward get together and she becomes a vampire but somehow I dont see that happening with this story lol.

I kinda thing Bella would make a good friend for her, not besties but friends yano

For last chap since it won't let me review again. The song I imagined is the first half of Spirited Away- One Summer Day because it's so beautiful, sad but also sweet, to me it sounds like a journey.

I loooove this story, I honestly think it's better than the real thing. The story Meyer should have done, with the diverse cast, less of the ridiculous lore and a love story that feels real... reminds me of the John Greene quote "I fell in love the way you fall asleep, slowly then all at once"

I haven't read this yet but I just wanted to say, from your authors note at the beginning and the changes you made... I think I'm gonna love this!

does alia have a gift?

its bringing me alot of joy. reading with a stupid smile on my face.

omigod, i totally didn't see this coming. like i guess i knew she had to be turned eventually for them to be together but iwas thinking you were going to make heer come back to forks after she graduates. and then they would rekindle and i dont know, whatever will happen then. but this is exciting

i really appreciate the thoughtfulness you put in the story. fan-fiction is often misconstrued as self-indulgent, which it can be, but it can also be a simple desire to explore more themes and scenarios with the characters or a world that you love. and it is just really fun to read and write, but i prefer some intelligence in my fun. thank you

I love this fanfic. Alia is such a wonderful character, and it's great to see Indian representation in the story. Edward needing therapy is actually so true, and I'm glad you still chose to include Bella in the story. You have a wonderful way of shaping the characters, adding your own unique twists. I hope you consider writing as a furure career. Really looking forward to the next chapter!

That’s what the letters said aaahhh

Awww, the first attempts are adorable lol, the way she starts sounding reasonable but cuts off when she starts insulting him feels so real and it’s funny to read, thanks for the chapter