| Reviews for Betrayed, Payment, Back Again |
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  Guest chapter 4 . 8/4 I hope Thalia didn't betray Percy |
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/31 Now is Thalia a traitor like the rest? What section of the book is she in. Who is in what section of the book. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/29 Next chapter |
 iamjmph01 chapter 2 . 6/10 k... in chapter 1 you said large harem and *maybe* girl/girl... My question is, if sex is required for the slavery, does that mean he will be having sex with all these male slaves? Or is it a double standard? If slash is inevitable please let us know...and remove the maybe from the girl/girl to be fair. If it's not cool. The descriptions are over the top, but hey he's prince of the universe, go big or go home... Thanks again for writing, and sharing. |
| iamjmph01 chapter 1 . 6/10 right... so im gonna keep reading, it looks good. I have just one small problem... the creators of the universe can make Percy and Annabeth uberpowerful Primordials with more domains than the Olympian 's combined, but can't heal him? They have to give him magical metal prosthesis and telepathy? That makes absolutely no sense and is going to bug the crap out of me... ohh well thank you for writing and sharing with us... |
| RebelQueen99 chapter 4 . 5/16 Please update |
| Entertainment lover chapter 4 . 5/11 Awesome chapter |
| Entertainment lover chapter 3 . 5/11 Fantastic Chapter. I am. glad that Percy has friends to believe in him. The Olympians will pay for it |
| Entertainment lover chapter 2 . 5/11 Fantastic chapter |
| Entertainment lover chapter 1 . 5/11 Wonderful chapter |
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/12 Please do some kane chronicles characters, people are going to get confused because this is in the crossover section but it's all PJ characters |
| thomaspheasant chapter 4 . 4/14 please update immediately |
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/12 Are any kane chronicles characters going to be in this |
| Arraia chapter 4 . 4/12 Perfect and update soon please |
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/9 PLEASE update the story! |
