Reviews for A Very Jagged Take-Down |
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Bluerose160 chapter 3 . 7/30 It might be a bit mean of me to say this, I love Lila bashing stories! There’s nothing better than bullies being taken down a notch. |
QueenOfStardust chapter 3 . 7/14 Second I’m ive read this, and it’s just as brilliant as the first time. I love all the times you write in Jagged—he’s such a mood, honestly—but there was one line in here that I kind of want to see turned into a story, although you in no way have to do it (it just seemed kind of interesting). I kind of want to see a story where Marinette is bribing Chat Noir with baked treats, so like that one line, but delved more into it? Maybe something like those “Five Times _ and the One Time _”? |
AnimexFreakz 0.o chapter 3 . 7/12 Such a good read! Thank you so much for writing, I really loved it! -kitty |
Alyssal316 chapter 1 . 6/25 This is the first story i read from Jagged Stones perspective and you did not disappoint! What an awesome Project: Take Down Lila story! |
Alyce Reide chapter 3 . 6/14 *wolfish grin* Have I mentioned how much I love these stories? I was super into sewing when I was in my tweens. Drew clothes, planned out designs, imagined my future as a famous designer. Oh yeah, and fixed a few seams. Even made a really simple dress once. And if someone else, particularly someone who was trying to turn my friends against me, tried to claim credit for my work? I'm luckier than Marinette. I have siblings who would help me punch Lila-er, I mean the hypothetical bully. My little brother is really strong, too, and he doesn't hit anyone weaker than him but I think he'd make an exception for someone like Lila. She's /special/, after all. :D |
Alyce Reide chapter 2 . 6/14 I really like how Jagged comes into class and...doesn't call Lila out (explicitly). I don't think I've seen that before. And now the whole class can feel proud of themselves for figuring out Lila was lying *all on their own* :p ...or hopefully they'll feel awful about not believing Mari. But yeah. Mari's smart here! |
Alyce Reide chapter 1 . 6/14 Jagged should ask Gina to legally adopt him (if you can even adopt an adult, I have no idea but it could work in the Miracuverse), and then he'd technically be Tom's brother and Marinette's uncle! Quite the callout song! |
LoveBug7744 chapter 1 . 6/10 Yes, you go Jagged. He is the best "Uncle" ever. Laughing so much right now. :) |
Hkt29 chapter 3 . 5/14 It's always great to see Lila being put in her place. |
Hkt29 chapter 2 . 5/14 Very good specially when Jagged told them that they were not smart for falling for Lila's lies. |
Hkt29 chapter 1 . 5/14 Loved it, a song about what a liar was Lila, her treachery has been inmortalized. |
Guest chapter 3 . 4/15 This. Was. Awesome! First, I am glad I am not the only one who's connecting Jagged to dragons #give_Jagged_the_dragon_miraculous Secondly, I love Markov! What a cute lil' bot! And you included him! Yay! Finally, this was an apic callout, with Chloe forvtge rescue! Brilliant! |
Guest chapter 2 . 4/15 This was done very smartly, gently. I love it. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/15 Great song! And great plot. And great everything. Good job! |
ItsTurquoise chapter 1 . 4/14 that's soooo sweet |