Reviews for When What's Right Is Wrong
sundiallove2 chapter 1 . 7/15
I wish this had been in the regular story! Smut for life!
PaAndreaBlack chapter 1 . 6/1
Thank you very much for such an incredible OS, you are a great writer, I am your fan.
Are there any POVs from Draco as well as with ATWT? Thank you very much for sharing your talent.
Many hugs!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/12
Love how Draco was so concerned about her. The scene was very well played out
JodiMarie2910 chapter 1 . 4/3
I read this again today and can't believe I didn't comment on it when it came out. Thank you thank you thank you so so very much for writing this one-shot! This was a scene I'd been hoping for, and I was SO excited when I saw this update. I remember dropping what I was doing so I could read it immediately and it is absolutely BEAUTIFUL! I love how you were able to make it sweet (and extremely hot) while still maintaining that awkward tension they have at this point in the story. This is why you are one of my inspirations as a writer. Thanks so much for The Auction and all it's different parts, which I have enjoyed thoroughly. You are definitely one of the best fanfic authors I've ever read. Take care. And I can't wait for the next Auction chapter! :D
BusanSatori chapter 1 . 3/13
Wonder what would have happened in the next chapter when Hermione was confirmed to still be able to have kids...
Just Altais chapter 1 . 2/9
This little AU, inside of the AU, was amazing.
The fact that they avoid doing the obvious thing, was so Draco. But it was a very enjoyable story *wink, wink*
You managed to give us the would they or won’t they vibe, even when they were already doing it, and let me tell you, that seems quite hard to accomplish. Pun non intended. But I’m happy that this two fools, finally gave in and enjoyed each other.
So thanks for the porn, have a lovely day.
Diana chapter 1 . 2/9
Oh. My. Stars. Why does the room always get a few degrees warmer every time I read your work? I need a cool tall drink now. Phew. Also, you're fab, by the way.
TodaySheWrites chapter 1 . 2/7
Holy hell that was amazing
phoenix.tycho chapter 1 . 2/5
AHHHH

As much as I love the way it happened in the actual story, and I love the TENSION the actual story has as we build up to this moment for real...this AU was fantastic and I loved it
Delancey654 chapter 1 . 2/2
I think you’re selling yourself short in calling this shameless smut. Yeah, they have sex, and it’s hot, but it’s really, really well-written. The last line is beautiful, and the conversation at the beginning is very well done. There are some people who unintentionally write stilted dialogue, but you are such a talented writer that you’re doing it on purpose to telegraph just how awkward this situation is.

Is it an oversight that this smutty one-shot isn’t tagged as complete? Dare I hope that you’ll grace us with a second chapter, either morning after and/or Draco’s POV? Not to be greedy, and no pressure, but I (and I’m sure many others) really would love to know what’s going through his head. Pretty please?
Guest chapter 1 . 1/26
Oh!This is what I needed)))you are the best!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/20
Thanks for posting this here for us non-facebookers. Really nice!
queensands chapter 1 . 1/20
Oh my. I have no words. Just precious.
dragonjun chapter 1 . 1/18
We need draco's POV...
Gaeleria chapter 1 . 1/17
Oh wow, this was a real treat! All these little “what ifs” in your own universe have been fun. Thanks for writing!
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