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lemondrizzlecake chapter 3 . 3/9 I've really liked this one, and once again it was a pleasure to Beta it :) I really like stories set way back, when there was a bigger divide between the younger kids still being children and the older kids trying to do they best at being responsible adults, and you captured it perfectly. I think of the next ones you've got ready, I'd love to read Neverland first. I just really love the way you write Debbie! But all of them sound good. Can't wait! |
lemondrizzlecake chapter 2 . 3/8 Lip and Fiona will forever be one of my favourite pair of TV siblings, so this was such a treat! I had completely forgotten that line from season 6, but it's so cool that you remembered it and built a story around it. I don't think you trivialised the issue, at all. I think you strike a good balance of not making it too heavy, which is helped by the fact that the whole narration is in a 13-year-old point of view. And Lip is the sweetest here. I love how he schemes, and I loved all the details you included like Fiona's running. Frank at the end was just perfect, too. Great job! |
lemondrizzlecake chapter 1 . 3/8 Sorry for this very late review. I've really missed your writing, and it was so good to get back into this little world of Gallagher siblings! I love how you built up to the reunion by having Ian feel so lonely and detached when he first got back home. Like his house didn't feel like his home, not until Liam showed up. Great job! |